Corruption of the Champion, part 13!!!!!
Yesss!! I made it!!! It's finally done!!!!
But #13 can't be that bad. After all, after the long wait, it features a 61 pages long chapter, and even has an after credits scene (Ha! Marvel hero movies, you have nothing on me, suckers!)
I will try to make the chapters shorter. Sometimes they drag for too long in production and I loose focus.
So... where did we left our hero the last time?
Uhm.. not bad... but I think it's time our Champion sees some familiar faces... Who could it be??
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Some short news!
Starting chapter 14, I'll start adding the images posted on the CoC Art Contest.Damn, they are good!
And remember, the contest is still open for your submission if you want to give a hand or get involved!
Thanks for all the feedback and all the art you submitted, guys! Really. Hope you enjoy this part!




Oh, parte 13 liberada... hora de descargar y leer .... muchísimas gracias vip. Saludos desde México ;)
ResponderEliminarDe nada! espero lo disfrutes, dime que te pareció
EliminarUna disculpa por apenas contestar. Me da gusto ver que has mantenido la calidad en los renders de Martin; aunque creo que ya está sucediendo lo que, en algun post pasado escrito en inglés, llegaste a comentar. Se nota la calidad superior de los renders de Martin sobre algunos personajes secundarios. Para ejemplo la jefa de la fábrica de pociones. Sin embargo es lo de menos y se entiende que ya tienes un script y avance en renders y sería bastante innecesario/moledto volver a generarlos. Respecto al desarrollo de la historia, sentí una gran emoción de volver a ver a Ceraph y aunque no vimos mucha acción con ella, tal vez porque esta vez tenía que cuidar de la elfa, nos presentaste una gran escena. La unica "queja" que podria decir es que, con los cambios de altura que ha tenido Martin, y la tonificacion muscular (la cual sigo considerando que hace que se vea muy sexy) y si comparamos las entregas anteriores, creo que Ceraph debió ser de menor tamaño y tal vez Martin le pudo haber dado más batalla.
EliminarPodre de lo que le deparará a Martin, porque quién sabe cuantas maldiciones ya tiene encima de él, no sólo por los piercings, sino también por bonus del tatuaje, ojala en el próximo número veamos los efectos que tienen todos esos extras. Sería interesante, y un buen guiño para todos tus fans, que sigas presentando cameos, tal vez Ceraph venia de la fiesta del/la minotauro de tu otra historia XD .
Yo sigo teniendo mis dudas de si Martin de verdad logrará llegar a la ciudad o más bien de que otras transformaciones tendrá antes de llegar. Extraño su cabellera rubia, ojala ahora que esta en el desierto la pueda recuperar o gane longitud. Nunca crei que llegaria a decirlo, pero sigo pensando que se le ve chico el miembro, ojala antes de que desaparezca (porque muchos esperamos que de desaparezca) tome más equinum o alguna otra cosa y eso sea resuelto (quien quita y hasta le sale otro). Ya me diste esperanzas de que si veremos el licor bimbo en acción, aunque no se lo deseo a Martin. porque aunque es seguro que lo volvera extremadamente sexy, es casi un hecho que no podrá seguir la misión. Esa cosa en el juego hace que prácticamente te la tengas que pasar masturbandote casi todo el día y sólo permite que mates criaturas pequeñas.
Otra consulta, el nuevo personaje deldels desierto es una "mother sand"??? Ojala en el siguiente numero esa duda pueda ser resuelta. Nuevamente muchas gracias por compartirnos todo tu tiempo, esfuerzo y talento. Saludos desde México ;)
супер !!!
ResponderEliminarБлагодаря!
EliminarWhen will add next chapter?
ResponderEliminarHe literally just added one chill bruh.
EliminarNext month probably.
EliminarGreat chapter by the way!
^^
EliminarVery nice and subtle for this chapter. Willthe new piercing change anything about her? We will have to see. But damn dude i cant wait for the next installment. So excited.
ResponderEliminarWheni saw jinxed chapter above i thought imediately to jinxxxed. Now i have to go back and read it again haha.
As a question, will she be getting any of that whisker fruut to make her a bit more feline? That was always a favorute of mine...
Thanks!
EliminarI'm actually debating myself on that. There's still a couple more of transformative items due to come, Mainly because I don't like the whiskers on her face
I meant more for the feline shaped face,cat ears, paw hands or claws.
EliminarThe paw hands could make her dexteruty a bit off for future fights ;)
It's like a drug, everytime I wanna see more and more. Great work! p.s. I wish to see main character more corrupted)
ResponderEliminarThanks AHAJIbruH4uK! For me it's like a drug too, I love making it I just wish it would be done faster
EliminarTHANKS, GOOOOOD MAN, I LOVE YOU, I WAIT NEW PART!!!!!!!!!!! SHIT MAN YOU DO MY DAY WOWOWOWOWOWOW AHAHWOWOWO
ResponderEliminarWOWOOW YOU'RE WELCOOOMEEE!!!
EliminarWOW you seem happy, it's contagious! Glad you liked it
You're cool) Thank you for the work done, I can not imagine anyone in the next turn, Martin)
ResponderEliminarNext time we'l lsee more familiar faces around - and what that piercing and tattoo will force out Champion to do
EliminarFinally! I can't wait to get home and read it.
ResponderEliminarGreat! Tell me if you liked it
EliminarI did! Keep them coming, they're great.
Eliminarand so the wait continues
ResponderEliminarMore like the wait restarts
EliminarAs awesome as always, thank you very much!
ResponderEliminarThanks you for taking the time to leave a reply
EliminarSe ha echo esperar. Ahora a disfrutarlo.
ResponderEliminarNice work vip !
ResponderEliminarCan't work next chapter :p
I meant wait* ^^
EliminarThanks! And let's never again speak of work!
EliminarTu que sabes de bebidas. Me tome una de estas https://goo.gl/photos/3GdYwfwhjnYLLWYE9 mientras leía tu cómic. Crees que me afectará igual que a Martin? XD
ResponderEliminarJA! buena bebida para este comic!
EliminarNo se... dine si la habitacion se siente mas grande que antes de beberla? Y por las dudas, ten sexo seguro - no quieres estar tirando goblins por alli, ya ves de que son capaces!
Solo me hizo crecer un poco la barriga cervecera.
EliminarDespués de ver tanto goblin casi me planteo plastificarla XD
i have jsut one censure, why u didnt put piercings on both of her nipples? but nice work as usually ;)
ResponderEliminarand can i ask, what program do you use for 3d models and for creating scenes?
OH, the answer is simple:
Eliminar1) every time I change the model pose I have to manually adjunt the piercing, so two piercing would take longer time and more work
2) Look it this way: there's still a nipple left to put another cursed piercing on!
I use DAZ Studio for creating 3D comics
i somehow hoped, the another cursed piercing would be on her cock ( the one who forbid her to attack) or do u plan to put some other curses on her?
Eliminarand do u also use DAZ for creating models/ characters, or do u use another software?
No, I only use DAZ and a bit of photoshop to polish the final images after they're rendered
EliminarThe piercings have their effect no matter where you put them!
Hey, vip! Capítulo incrível, como sempre! Estou adorando a série. Mas sabe, tenho sentido falta dos seus captions recentemente. Não estou cobrando, é só que AMO suas histórias e sinto falta de uma leiturinha rápida mas excelente XD Espero não ter soado mal, aliás!
ResponderEliminarDe qualquer forma, obrigado pelo ótimo trabalho! Abraços do Brasil!
Ei! Desculpe o meu português está enferrujado ... Vou ter que usar o Google Translate para responder.
EliminarSim, estou seriamente atrasado em Captions. Só falta o tempo livre ultimamente. A mini série deste ano, no entanto, acho que vou lançá-la em março enquanto esperamos pelo capítulo 14
I received a notice of undelivered message and I'm not sure if it was not my email for you. Did you get my email?
ResponderEliminarEdvin
Hi Edvin I get you email, I'll reply you after I've finished reading the comments
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ResponderEliminarAww man. So the contest is over? And I just finished the picture. Oh well. I'll post it
ResponderEliminarhttp://protogetsbuckets.tumblr.com/image/157758357028
No, Jose, it says at the botton of the post "the contest is still open"!
EliminarBut I did get your contribution and I'll reply you on the contest entry
Cuando harás captions?
ResponderEliminarVengo retrasado con las captions, verdad?
EliminarSupongo que haré algunas (la mini-serie de este año por ejemplo) en los proximos dias para subir algo antes del capítulo 14
Do you keep any lossless versions of these comics like PNGs somewhere (Preferably ones without any text added)?
ResponderEliminarI'm asking because i noticed a lot of typos, grammatical errors or weird phrasing throughout all the chapters that i'd like to fix, but editing from lossy jpegs and then re-compressing the fixed version would lead to quality loss i would like to avoid if possible.
Also, instances where non-english text is added directly on top of the images (a lot of instances in this chapter) would be almost impossible to "fix" on 3D renders, because they can't be easily redrawn like on 2d mangas. This also makes in extremely hard to translate the comic into other languages and have it look at least half way professionally done.
Anyway, keep up the good work, as i've been enjoying this comic tremendously, even though my perfectionist nature wishes i could help improve it ;)
Hi Axilia, I have some .pngs saved, they're raw renders, but not enough to make a full chapter, and each one of them weights like 10 Mb each
EliminarV.I.P. again you shown your work, it's through the roof. i love the amount of details in the skin of the champion, the blood veins under the skin, the faces our champion makes, the back grounds with detail in them too, not just noise; and the story is never the same the character grows over time not just in body; and the comedy i can't help but laugh with the goblin fight.
ResponderEliminar"Although shocked when he found they where his, he killed his kids; so much for father/mother of the year."
I love this chapter thank you for your hard work, nothing is easy what you are doing.
Thank you for everyone that made a pic in the contest i love your work too.
ps. wings, our champion needs wings ;p and red hair lol "never going to give up!"
Thanks a lot!
EliminarI admit the part with the football kick was something I add because I find it funny, not being sure if it was...
Thanks also for noticing the details of her skin. It takes an extra couple of minutes to render with those details, but I love how it looks, my only worry is that the lesser detail of the rest of the characters will be noticeable from time to time
The contest is going fine, when I asked to simply "draw for free" I expected less than 3 contributions, but we got 5 or 6 already
Наконец-то! Thanks vip, great work:)
ResponderEliminarДа, это заняло какое-то время, не так ли? Спасибо за комментарий!
EliminarOnce again you have not only succeeded in creating high quality content, but delivered a personal favorite of mine. :) Phenomenal work!
ResponderEliminarPErsonal favorite... piercing, tattoo, goblins? Wich one?
EliminarThanks for the comment!
Great work again! Love this story up to now! cant wait till part 14!
ResponderEliminarThanks voidhead78, I'll try to make it as soon as possible
EliminarI haven't read it yet, but I'm hoping our hero grows balls and keeps the vagina.
ResponderEliminarEven if that doesn't happen I will gladly masturbate to this chapter like I have all the others.
Wow, too much information!!!!
EliminarBut thanks, of course
Great work again man, really cool chapter, I like the new piercing but actually the tattoo is what I loved the most this time, I can't wait to see what the tattoo effect is or if it even has one, if not it still is an awesome add, I hope next time he changes outfit, grows another pair of boobs or at least becomes less muscular *¬*, but of course it's only a wish, you go your way XD
ResponderEliminarTake all the time you want and need for the next chapter, after all you are the first person you have to make happy and with such a great final result I don't know why people complain
Anyway until next time and keep up the great work =D
Thanks a lot!
EliminarOf course that tattoo has magical powers, but they'll manifest in the next chapter
OMG don't take it wrong but actually I liked it better how the slave is gonna end up than how the champion is doing right now >w< do you by any chance have a full size render of the purple gal that we can download please O///w///O. Also I cant wait to see what the cum witch does to Martin, I hope she has some elixir with her, or maybe she leaves behind a tattered scroll although at this point it's not that useful unless you have a new use for it ;)
ResponderEliminarI don't take it wrong, don't worry.
EliminarI have not render any more images of the corrupted elfs girl... But I believe we'll see her again, fully transformed. Almost sure, no promises, depends on how the story goes.
It seems that Martin trained more bloody fighting style - I feel sorry for poor goblins, Martin was too hard on them.
ResponderEliminarI hope that Martin will break the piercing curse and enslave that omnibus someday
Well I recon he was losing too many fights, for a guys that spent his life training for combat, also he is corrupted and angry by now so he has less restrains when unleashing his fury.
EliminarI stumbled upon this fanfic quite a while ago and I have to say its very well done. Its always been a highlight of my month. Thanks so much for doing it.
ResponderEliminarI'd like to ask you to consider adding the phoenix tower quest to the story. It was my favorite part of CoC.
Hi, thanks a lot! I'm glad you find it so good.
EliminarNo, sadly the Phoenix Tower is not on my main script so far
Great great stuff! I especially enjoyed the post-script with the foreboding veiled figure. I know just enough about the CoC story line to guess what direction you might take with this at one point. I'm looking forward to it. :)
ResponderEliminarThanks! I'm just not sure if we'll get there soon or maybe closer to the end
EliminarThis was unbelievable! I am mind blown. I've just discovered your work today and i am amazed, i came 3 times reading from beginning to end and after i went back en came more 2 times. Thank you, i love your work. Part XI was incredible, i can't believe you used futa + forced body modification + bondage + orgasm denial + mind break, i came so much i almost passed out, PLEASE do that again if you can.
ResponderEliminarThanks, a bit too much information, but thanks anyway.
EliminarFor what I see in the comments, Part 11 so far has been the most favoured one
Yesss! There's that piercing ;)
ResponderEliminarAnd it was a nice final fight scene, too. Guess we won't see any of that in the near future ;) Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Thanks Rel!
EliminarMaybe we'll take a break from so much fighting... If you know what I mean
Will there be anymore pregnancy, or MILFS?
ResponderEliminarThere are at least 2 more MILFs in CoC (3 if he does the phoenix quest).
EliminarIf you haven't already, you should go play the game at Fenoxo.com. Its free to play.
Yep!
EliminarAnother vote for preg here. :3
ResponderEliminarConsidered!
EliminarYup voting for preg as well keep up the good work
EliminarWow thanks, it's really a great chapter, your hard work is worth the wait and even more, you rule dude
ResponderEliminarJust a question, are we going to see that bimbo liqueur being used in a certain harpy or a monk? because that'd be the best
WE'll see the Bimbo Liqueur in action but not yet. No more spoilers!
Eliminari wish for ceraph and another piercing... lo and behold, my wishes are granted.... much science has been advanced, many thanks for your contributions to society XD.
ResponderEliminarLol, I guess it almost as important as finding a cure for cancer.
EliminarGlad you get what you wished for! I'm still waiting my LaBova from last christmas
Just wonderful, I love these comics so much. Thank you for making them. I am ecstatic over seeing the Factory. While I know no spoilers or anything. I really want our Hero to turn into a full on Heroine(lose the cock)and lose her soul to become a powerful succubus. I love that ending in C.o.C., but it ends, and I want to see it continued. Either way, I'm sure I'll love what you have in store for us.
ResponderEliminarThanks a lot!
EliminarWhile I'm not sure how it will end yet, I admit i'm starting to get a bit tired, and have quite a lot of transformation waiting to happen!
Ciao Vip...what do I need the ring on the nipple?
ResponderEliminarCiao Lorenzo!
EliminarI don't understand what you mean this time! ask again in Italian
l'anello sul capezzolo a cosa serve?
EliminarSi sa che cosa il piercing capezzolo fa nel prossimo capitolo!
Eliminarpenis pierce please!!
ResponderEliminarI wish she finds some Cerulean Potion somewhere, either that or that we find Kelt already, maybe he could use her like Akbal did on chapter 11
ResponderEliminarI just can say, that is likely that the farm might be featured
EliminarAmazing series so far! Please tell me you're going to do an interpretation of the Essie "gardening" scene at some point. Keep up the fantastic work!
ResponderEliminarI think that would be very hard to make in 3D? But it would be super awesome!
Eliminar^^
Eliminarbut... who knows... I wasn't planing on doing the Sand Trap, either
Excellent work as always. Realistically, when do envisage part 14 will be released?
ResponderEliminarIn April? Vip does this in the sparetime after work and life, I guess. So unless death happens, or Vip happens to get an bad ending, part 14 will come;)
EliminarBest bet? 1 week.
EliminarLikely? 2 weeks
Pessimistic? 3 weeks
I just returned from a work travel
Great work! Love the chapter and the whole series!
ResponderEliminarIs it possible that the champion will become more feminine again?
EVERYHITING is possible!
EliminarIs there another hit to the intelligence coming up? I'm not super familiar with Coc
ResponderEliminarThere will be. there are several ways to make the champions smarter or dumber
EliminarCiao Vip, è da un po' che non commento, pur seguendo il tuo bel blog. Grandissimo come sempre! Complimenti per la tecnica 3d e le idee davvero creative.
ResponderEliminarSono proprio curioso, di scoprire cosa capiterà al nostro Campione.
Personalmente, mi sarebbe piaciuta qualche mutazione bestiale in più, specie per la sua appendice maschile, come tipico di CoC...
Così come spero ancora nell'incontro del centauro Kelt,
che sicuramente saprebbe come sitemare il Campione.
Ancora complimenti e saluti. Davide
Hello Vip, is a bit 'I do not comment, while following your beautiful blog. Great as always! Compliments to the 3d technique and really creative ideas.
I'm just curious to find out what will happen to our Champion.
Personally, I would have liked a few more animal-like mutation, especially his naughty bits, as typical CoC ...
Just as I still hope in the encounter of the centaur Kelt, that surely he would know how to fix the Champion.
Again congratulations and greetings. Davide
PS: on piercings in DAZ3D, I believe the use of Rigid Node, may be for you.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2CJWelfIMxI
Hi Davide!
EliminarQuite an useful tip. Seems like you're always learning and learning stuff with DAZ sometime!
I'll try it out and see if it works for me. thanks a lot!
Oh, and about Kelt... Kelt is dangerously close to one of the game's bad ending, you know?
Hey Vip can we expect to see next chapter this week ? :p (best bet I saw :p)
ResponderEliminarSorry, maybe this weekend if we're lucky
EliminarHey VIP as usual your stuff rocks
ResponderEliminarI found this site the other day loads of free cartoons while the downloading is slow and restricted so you can only download so many per hour/day there are loads there to pick from might make the waiting easier for some of your other impatiently waiting fans
https://svscomics.com/category/gender+bender
try this site. no downloading required. all of vip's work can be found here
Eliminardo NOT download my work from there.
EliminarThey profit from MY FREE work with the ads and popups before every download.
Hey Vip, your stuff is great, is posting the next chapter this weekend looking hopeful?? Keep it up!
ResponderEliminarWe'll see if I can make it this weekend. again, probably have to chop the chapter in half, its getting very large
Eliminarho god... i love your art so much...! Hi Vip ! This is as always an amazing work. i can't wait to see next part. But i was wondering if you could add some doggy or piggy things to our champion (i mean, now he already have a pretty tail), things witch could help him/her to think or look like a little more like animal's female. i was thinking of cute little snout with fat lips, but not too much, in oder to allowed martin to stay slutty and pretty (of course, we don't want to hurt her feminity ;)), but just a mark of bestiality wo could hit again our fighter's honnor. Just enough for beeing permanently ashamed of what he had become :) (I was also thinking about bendzz's art on deviantart, with those bunny secretary, if you have already seen that.) And of course, anything witch could make Martin more feminine, including remooving his cock if necessary. it's just an idee. Anyway,i trust you for doing better of our hopes, and you already did : i'm a big fan of your art.
ResponderEliminarHey! thanks a lot!
EliminarI only wish I could do in 3D what those guys do in their drawing. The most challenging part of morphing the 3D models is not leaving them look as the nightmare version of what you imagined!
That being said, I can tell you there will be some peppers in the comic, just like in the game. If you know what that means...
I feel like VIP may be feeling a bit too much pressure to pump out work on this series. Sure, they are aweasome but you are trying to do the work that someone would get paid for to do as an all-time job.
ResponderEliminarMaybe you should work on lighter projects later. I know you already know what you want to do but I want to suggest what many in your situation do that is some kind of diary (of your style), that way you just need to do a few renders a week (like 5 or 6), which I think would be less stressful for you.
That's just what I think though, I still love your work and want you to keep it up as much as you can :)
Pressure is nice, nicer than indiference. But no, I do not feel so much pressure, mainly because I'm not getting paid and I can manage my own times, one of the main reasons why I keep this as a hobby and never do commisions.
EliminarAlso, I'm surprised at the lack of trolls in the comments. Only a couple so far and it's been so long since this comic started!
Developer diaries... I don't know. Takes time away from the actual comic making. Maybe from time to time a post about development to ease the waiting
Hype 14 part!
ResponderEliminarХотелось бы понаблюдать за процессом создания комиксов. Был бы очень признателен, даже за информацию по программам (софту). Спасибо за комиксы!
(Я надеюсь, что Google Translate получит это право)
EliminarЯ рад, что тебе это нравится. Я использую студию DAZ для трехмерной работы и ретуширования, Comic Life для создания комикса (макета страницы, панели, диалоговые окна) и Photoshop, чтобы исправить мелкие проблемы в некоторых рендерах.
Я вряд ли мог бы объяснить весь процесс в комментарии, но все эти программы нелегко изучить, а в Интернете более чем достаточно учебников
when ?
ResponderEliminarI could tell you, but you forgot to say the magic word
EliminarThanks for your work, really looking forward to the next chapter!
ResponderEliminarthanks for taking the time to comment!
EliminarЯ просто влюбился в эту историю о трансформации!!!
ResponderEliminarНицца! Надеюсь, вам понравятся следующие главы, изменения в Чемпионе еще не завершены!
EliminarRIP VIP
ResponderEliminarlol dont be melodramatic, he is working and is fine.
Eliminarcalm down. Not everything needs to be updated constantly to be "alive"!
EliminarWhen will add next chapter?
ResponderEliminarwhen he's good and ready to do it and not a second before
EliminarMaybe this weeked, maybe I'll chop it in half.
EliminarDamn people, scroll up and read, VIP mentioned that a release this weekend would happen as a BEST CASE scenario but that it was much more likely to be released next weekend or the weekend after that.
ResponderEliminar*sigh* Some people...
Don't be mad, I'm not.
EliminarI do not expect people to read much. I know most scroll down to the download links, and reading 100 comments can be quite boring!
I'll be worried the day no one cares if I release the new chapter!
Привет! Если интересно, могу придумывать сюжеты (вплоть до поз) )
ResponderEliminarКак пример
Путешествие принца
Крутой телохранительнице, совершившей крупную провинность, поручают сопроводить "лишнего" принца в монастырь (чтобы не мог претендовать на престол).
На деле это означает "отвести подальше за угол и убить".
Действующие лица:
Воительница Арра
Принц
Паж принца
Небольшой отряд воинов
1. Принц слишком погружен в думы о судьбах королевства и не видит, как изнывающая от недостатка мужского внимания воительница пытается его склеить.
Воительница приглашает в палатку несколько воинов из отряда сопровождения.
Принц, погруженный в свои мысли, этого не замечает, но его паж смотрит во все глаза.
2. На другой день сцена повторяется. Паж принца не выдержав начинает мастурбировать.
3. На третий день Арра мастурбирует, глядя на мальчишек... паж мастурбирует в ответ. Это замечает принц и удивляется - "Что вы делаете?".
В ответ Арра кладет руку пажа на член принца, и паж начинает дрочить член повелителя. Принц неуверенно отвечает.
4. Арра снова трахается со стражником, отсасывая здоровенному негру прямо перед мальчишками. Затем она поворачивается к пажу и предлагает присоединиться.
Паж начинает сосать... и заглатывает неожиданно глубоко.
Арра целует пажа, а потом поворачивается к принцу и предлагает устроить соревнование, кто возьмет в рот больше члена.
Принц отказывается...
5. Утром следуещего дня принц обнаруживает себя связанным. Паж извиняется перед принцем, говоря, что его заставили, и вставляет принцу в рот свой маленький член.
Принц не может возразить из-за кляпа-кольца во рту.
А воительница сосет принцу, пока он принимает в ро член собственного пажа.
7. Принц не может сопротивляться - у него эрекция от члена собственного стражника во рту!
8. Паж тем временем охотно принимает рукоятку от меча телохранительницы
(путешествие, во время которого принц и его паж становятся первостатейными блядями с членами и титьками, которые трахаются как с людьми, так и с монстрами. При этом в стране тем временем - переворот; попытка сбыть принца в монастырь проваливается, потому что принцсоблазняет всех монахов);
королевская стража находит принца и сажает его на престол... и королевство становится тем ещё развратным местечком)
Распаленное женское тело распласталось на тончайших простынях ливийского паучьего шёлка, вздрагивая от прокатывающихся по мышцам сладострастным волнам.
EliminarВиновница оргазма – рослая северянка с длинными волосами льдисто-белого цвета оторвалась от местечка между широко раскинутых ног подруги потянулась к стоящему у изголовья мечу.
Длинная, на четыре ладони, рукоять увенчивалась массивным шишковидным навершием, и не требовалось особой догадливости, чтобы понять, для каких надобностей варварка могла бы использовать эту игрушку.
Нагретый в пламени факела наконечник уже достаточно остыл, и, небрежно стерев простыней копоть, северянка приставила навершие к святая святых. Анатомия раковины любви была уже неплохо изучена ею с помощью длинных, тонких, но сильных пальцев с коротко обрезанными ногтями и юркого языка, поэтому удар – нанесенный с должной силой и нежностью – был направлен верно.
Подруга вскрикнула, не удержавшись, но северянка не останавливалась, продолжая ритмично действовать рукоятью меча в девственно-узком отверстии. И уже спустя несколько секунд крик боли и неожиданности перешел в сладострастные и ничем не сдерживаемые стоны.
Именно так и застал Финвел Второй Рогатый свою дочь Альту – бесстыдно принимающей в себя меч капитана северной стражи Арры Герр, - будь прокляты эти варварские племена и имена шайтаном! – меч, в казармах стражи давно прозванный Лишателем Девственности.
В этот раз Валькирия выбрала любовницу явно не по себе.
Способ связи- где укажешь )
Святое дерьмо, которое было много, чтобы перевести и прочитать!
EliminarПоскольку я не говорю по-русски, мне пришлось использовать Google Translate, и некоторые части перевода не имели никакого смысла.
Я думаю, что я понимаю большую часть истории, но мне не нравится концовка. Я полагаю, что Рпинце нужно связать цепями и продать варварам, его давним врагам, как рабам!
Hi guys, I've been out for a few days, sorry for the lack of responses. I'll be answering the comments soon
ResponderEliminarCiao Vip :) come stai?
ResponderEliminarCiao Lorenzo! OK di tutto, ero ansioso di tornare a casa e continuare a lavorare sul fumetto. Tutto OK in Italia?
EliminarIn Italia tutto Ok!! Grazie!! Prendi il tuo tempo per un ottimo lavoro.
EliminarVipCaptions,
ResponderEliminarIt's always a pleasure to have the benefit of your work. I respect your work ethic because rather than using the same system and methods for your stories you've made advances in your techniques and technology pushing yourself to a higher quality which takes more time and effort.
Being able to find your earliest work online and seeing your growth in terms of art, rendering, characters and story to where you are now is a great achievement. While quietly respectful, I wanted to take this moment to make mention that with anything personally crafted I know that it's ready when it's ready.
Thanks again, as always looking forward to the next chapter!
thats, well, terribly nice! thanks a lot!
EliminarI know I might sound a bit arrogant but my looking at my early works makes my eyes hurt, and yet, there's still so much to learn and improve!
Ciao vip !
ResponderEliminarHai in programma di modificare anche i piedi del campione facendoli diventare più demoniaci come artigli ?
Lo spero anche io e.e
EliminarHell yes, i piedi cambieranno. Ma io non posso dirvi in che cosa!
EliminarHello welcome to the hype train
ResponderEliminarthx for explain (спасибо за объяснение по soft)
ResponderEliminarЯ как технический специалист, если и займусь этим, то обязательно оставлю ссылку на тебя. Спасибо за информацию. Спасибо за комиксы. Жду 14 часть!
Чем я буду ждать, дай мне знать.
EliminarГлава 14 Это будет в эту субботу! Ну ... Может быть, это воскресенье ... Но всего за пару дней
Hello VIP! Great chapter! The story is getting better and better, it is a very fun ride. I'm waiting impatiently for the completion of chapter XIV.
ResponderEliminarConcerning the champion, I hope he doesn't lose his male genitalia or if he does that he get it back (maybe using some more incubus draft to look like ever more demonic?). I believe that the champion should experience all kinds of pleasure and try to resist it as best as he can... in his current state (lol). I like the way he tries to remember his mission and focus (but failing or going totally berserk).
I appreciated the fact that at the end of chapter XII that the champion at to go barefoot :P, it does give a feeling of him being more "savage". Otherwise, you forgot that he couldn't equip his bottom anymore (if we can even consider it a cloth so it doesn't really matter).
Will the Cum-witch destroy his top before having her way with him? Will the champion find new clothes and be affected by the curse again (his reaction could be fun to see again)? Will he pierce his other nipple with a new nipple ring?
I sure will sit and watch what you will give us for the next chapters ;)!
See ya! (And sorry for the long post)
No apology needed my friend.
EliminarI think it's time to change his wardrove. And of course that ring curse it's still working!
As for genitals, I stand firm in my position, no spoilers. whatever direction I take, it's a controversial subject with equal amounts of hate and love for it
hey after this story is over, and probably after u take a break from it will you consider doing one about TiTS (trails in tainted space) Fenoxos current game in the making?
ResponderEliminarthat wouldn't be for a long long time
EliminarOh no no no no no no
EliminarTiTS its even longer than CoC!!!!
I'd love to but I d not have the time or energy to invest in it. also TiTS having so much space/tech related stuff would require a bigger effort in backgrounds and lights
Hi vip, you said maybe this weekend you post part 14. Any news about it? I'm really interested :) and thanks for all the great work.
ResponderEliminarhopefully today, i've been checking back all weekend
EliminarSaturday or Sunday, 99% sure!!!
EliminarOjala esta semana si nos puedas presumir la parte 14
ResponderEliminarSabado o Domingo creo que estará terminada!
EliminarIm not saying im checking for update far more often than i should but i do. Like couple times a day . Senpai notice me
ResponderEliminarsame
Eliminarthe wait is almost over, for real
EliminarFrequant updates of progress would be nice. This way you wouldnt have so many people asking you everyday. Im just saying
ResponderEliminartrue
Eliminartrue, but that would require for me to be at home, and I wasn't
EliminarHowdy VipCaptions! I see so many multi language responses from you in the comments. I'm curious VipCaptions... how many languages do you speak?
ResponderEliminarBTW, the frequency of the updates isn't as important to me. You do great work and it's worth the wait!
Oh! I'd like to add another vote for pregnancy/birth :)
Same here!
EliminarHay manera que nos compartas por favor la traduccion del post en ruso... usé el google translator y no llegue a nada entendible :'(
EliminarWell my native language is spanish. I can speak english, half portuguese and some italian. the rest is up to Google translator and having faith that it'll translate into something that makes sense!
EliminarHola! el comentario en ruso me sugiere una idea para un comic. Si lo traduces al ingles tiene mas sentido (no olvides que el Google translator esta pensado para el ingles como idioma central)
EliminarHi Vip! I really love the CoC comics and I can't wait until the next chapter, do you have any idea when it's going to be ready? Keep making these fantastic comics!
ResponderEliminarSaturday / Sunday! Almost there!
EliminarRereading entire series for the thousandth time... I NEED MY FIX!! lol
ResponderEliminarSaturday / Sunday!
Eliminarhurmm. i love this COC series!! very kinky and beautufully done. hopefully chapter 14 is out soon. me cannot wait lol.
ResponderEliminarthanks!
EliminarSaturday / Sunday!
Big fan but I have a feeling you aren't gonna post it this month correct if I'm wrong
ResponderEliminarYou're wrong
Eliminarhe must be out of town again being he hasnt gave us any updates since the 27th
ResponderEliminarI was indeed!
Eliminarbut now... releasing Saturday / Sunday!
I wanna throw money at you for faster CoC updates lol =) Patreon or riot :D
ResponderEliminarEstoy seguro que no serias el único XD
EliminarThanks! Saturday / Sunday itll be up!
EliminarGive the guy a rest on the posting. The art and story are amazing. I want to see the next chapter too. But i prefer it to be done to the same amazing quality. If i have to wait longer cof that, so be it.
ResponderEliminarKeep up the great work and dont let anyone rush you ������
I agree. One should not hurry on great artists.
EliminarAsi es, que pase el tiempo que sea necesario. En esperas asi de largas siempre hemos sido recompensados :)
Eliminarthanks!
Eliminari think both things are fine - the support and patience are amazing, and some polite request to speed up means people are still interested
IM BACK!!!!!
ResponderEliminarMaybe tomorrow we'll have an update. Thanks for your patience!
thank god
EliminarI was wondering if you have enough time free if maybe you could also post some captions as well. I will understand if you don't have enough time, but i thought i would ask :)
EliminarI have very few captions and a special series halfway done. It'May because I'll probably be away several weeks in May
EliminarThanks!
ResponderEliminarWelcome back !!! can't wait tomorrow :p
ResponderEliminarЯ рад, что ты вернулся. Очень жду 14 часть. Твои работы уникальны в своем роде, что делает тебя редким автором. Продолжай в том же духе. ( Мартин еще та похотливая сука ;))
ResponderEliminarБольшое спасибо! Я стараюсь исследовать новые вещи, у меня есть темы, которые я люблю больше других, и я повторяю их, но все же стараюсь охватить столько фетишей, сколько смогу. Обычно я заканчиваю тем, что люблю их!
EliminarLooking forward to it!
ResponderEliminarMe da gusto ver que has mantenido la calidad en los renders de Martin; aunque creo que ya está sucediendo lo que, en algun post pasado escrito en inglés, llegaste a comentar. Se nota la calidad superior de los renders de Martin sobre algunos personajes secundarios. Para ejemplo la jefa de la fábrica de pociones. Sin embargo es lo de menos y se entiende que ya tienes un script y avance en renders y sería bastante innecesario/moledto volver a generarlos. Respecto al desarrollo de la historia, sentí una gran emoción de volver a ver a Ceraph y aunque no vimos mucha acción con ella, tal vez porque esta vez tenía que cuidar de la elfa, nos presentaste una gran escena. La unica "queja" que podria decir es que, con los cambios de altura que ha tenido Martin, y la tonificacion muscular (la cual sigo considerando que hace que se vea muy sexy) y si comparamos las entregas anteriores, creo que Ceraph debió ser de menor tamaño y tal vez Martin le pudo haber dado más batalla.
ResponderEliminarPodre de lo que le deparará a Martin, porque quién sabe cuantas maldiciones ya tiene encima de él, no sólo por los piercings, sino también por bonus del tatuaje, ojala en el próximo número veamos los efectos que tienen todos esos extras. Sería interesante, y un buen guiño para todos tus fans, que sigas presentando cameos, tal vez Ceraph venia de la fiesta del/la minotauro de tu otra historia XD .
Yo sigo teniendo mis dudas de si Martin de verdad logrará llegar a la ciudad o más bien de que otras transformaciones tendrá antes de llegar. Extraño su cabellera rubia, ojala ahora que esta en el desierto la pueda recuperar o gane longitud. Nunca crei que llegaria a decirlo, pero sigo pensando que se le ve chico el miembro, ojala antes de que desaparezca (porque muchos esperamos que de desaparezca) tome más equinum o alguna otra cosa y eso sea resuelto (quien quita y hasta le sale otro). Ya me diste esperanzas de que si veremos el licor bimbo en acción, aunque no se lo deseo a Martin. porque aunque es seguro que lo volvera extremadamente sexy, es casi un hecho que no podrá seguir la misión. Esa cosa en el juego hace que prácticamente te la tengas que pasar masturbandote casi todo el día y sólo permite que mates criaturas pequeñas.
Otra consulta, el nuevo personaje deldels desierto es una "mother sand"??? Ojala en el siguiente numero esa duda pueda ser resuelta. Nuevamente muchas gracias por compartirnos todo tu tiempo, esfuerzo y talento. Saludos desde México ;)
- Martin usa una textura distinta a los demas personajes... Siempre se verá mejor. Dos personajes usando ese tratamiento d etexturas tardan casi el triple en terminar el render!
Eliminar- Si! veras lso efectos del tattoo y del piercing en el episodio 14
- Ceraph ya no tendrá la participacion que tuvo antes, pero volvera a aparecer brevemente
- No voy a dar spoilers del tamaño del miembro o del Bimbo Liqueur (sobre todo habiendo Bimbo Champagne que es mas comodo de usar y... ups! un spoiler!)
- El nuevo personaje no es la sand mother... es un personaje que conoces mas adelante en el juego y esta relacionada con las sand witches.
did you died?
ResponderEliminarare you a fucking idiot
Eliminarno hes back and says to expect something today
Eliminargo fuck yourself asshole
Eliminarsome people should be forbitten to enjoy your stuff vip, maybe it would be possible with an IP adress excluder ? ;)
EliminarDid you learned to read?
Eliminartoday / tomorrow as I said earlier.
Hi guys, I'm working on paart 14. I think I can finish making the dialogues and late photoshop fixes very very late this night, but I don't wan't to promise anything
ResponderEliminar