CoC #26: XXL Anniversary Edition!
Ooof! So many problems slowing the development of this chapter! But guess what? As always, you get something in return for your patience!
Because this is no regular chapter... Oh no, this is the Anniversary Edition! It can also be considered a standalone chapter, something like a super bonus chapter.
But why is that? What makes this chapter different? First of, it's fucking 78 pages long, and if that wasn't enough, I took into consideration a lot of the feedback you provided me in order to make this chapter... So a lot of things you suggested via comments or Patreon polls and messages are being featured in this chapter!
But before we get into it, how we left our fearless Champion the last time?
And how you liked the special Anniversary logo? Shall I keep it, or return to the old one?
I dunno. I kinda like the way it turned out. Here's a solo pic if you liked it too.
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And I hope you share your thoughts and ideas too!
Thanks for stopping by and for all the support!
OH YES FINALLY IT CAME OUT
ReplyDeleteI just read it. It was so fucking twisted and hot, seeing martin turn into a corrupted bitch. You know, at first I hoped our champ could have a nice ending, but now it's going down waaaay better than I imagined! Nice "fucking" work!
ReplyDeleteConsidering all Martin's been through, I think had a bit of anger that needed to be released, right?
DeleteHey VIP, Sitri here!
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantastic chapter, I enjoyed every page of it. That fight scenes choreography and camera settings were perfect and that centaur TF, just amazing. I think this was the first one I saw so detailed.
But deep down I was hoping that he gets a little more humiliated by turning him into an always horny breeding machine goblin, like Tamani.
Sigh... I guess I never get my thicc goblin girl.
But again, excellent chapter. I'm a little sad it's getting to an end soon.
Hey Sitri!!
DeleteThanks a lot! I'm so glad you liked it. HE might not have ended as a breeding achine, but think about this: he's just roming the realm, horny, brainless, popping eggs. I think its quite close!
As a side note, damn, never try centur TF... It's so hard! better be prepared to a lot of postwork if you do.
You're right. But how funny would have it been if he shrunk down to half of Martins size and she's just laughing at her. Trying to punch Martin but can't reach that high falling back on her fat ass. Then running away crying and swearing revenge with a menacing expression while can't stop masturbating and thinking of getting pregnant... hehehe
DeleteAlso I guess I just really like goblin girls XD
Yeah, I figured that out in the moment I saw her new legs pushing out. It was a very impressive piece of work you put down.
Also, I wanted to ask. Did you use the Ciri character model to Geralts female form?
Yeah, it would've been funny... But Martin would need a dick to make that scenario truly work. After all, Goblins have the perfect height to give BJs standing
DeleteYes, I used the Ciri model as a base.
Ohhh 😯not my Think
ReplyDeletei waiting for next comic😛😛😛😘
But Transformation Gerald nice
DeleteIt has classic TG involved, you should like it! at least half of it :)
DeleteCan't wait to get home and read it! Thanks Vip!
ReplyDeleteGreat, I'm looking forward to your opinion
DeleteWell I really enjoyed it. Also thanks for the hard work!
DeleteNP, thanks for coming back to leave a comment!
DeleteCiao vip! Capito fantastico! Ho amato queste pagine. Il combattimento è stato fatto molto bene e molto equilibrata.
ReplyDeleteL'introduzione di the witcher è stata una novità molto bella.
Ho adorato la scena dove lui prende la bottiglia di la nuova nel sedere e quando lui diventa una fabbrica di uova. Chissà se troveremo geralt a tel'andre in un pollaio.
Grazie per il tuo lavoro. Non riesco ad aspettare il fumetto di halloween!
Ciao Christian come stai?
DeleteSono contento che ti sia piaciuto il nuovo capitolo! Sì, credo che l'introduzione di un nuovo personaggio esterno all'universo CoC avrebbe rinfrescato la serie, quindi chi meglio di un Witcher?
Potremmo vederlo di nuovo ... chi lo sa? Ho un grande finale in programma, se ce la faccio, lo vedremo ... per quello che gli è successo.
Thx for new chapter.
ReplyDeleteActually, i like the old logo more btw.
Thanks! Considered
DeleteAmazing work.) finally fresh air, i have to admit, Martin was so changed that those last/future changes aren't so important... m2f and bimbification/first changes are always most interesting.))
ReplyDeleteI know, the pre-tf and mid-tf when things happen are always more exciting than the post-tf, when everything is doe and the arc is closing. Bringing Gerard was a good excuse to enjoy some TGTF from scratch!
DeleteResident long hair caption requester here! (Should I still call myself that? I mean, you DID make the caption already, just call me "Potato" )
ReplyDeleteLoved the chapter! Definitely prefer the final transformation form you decided for Gerard over the original one you considered. Fun chapter overall! The star of the show for me was definitely our champions braids! It's the best hairstyle so far and I definitely hope it makes a comeback again in a future chapter!
So resident braids requester perhaps? Potato is fine as well, lol.
Great work as always of course, and thank you for all the effort put into this chapter!
I know too many potatos. I will never forget Redisent Long Hair on the other hand!
DeleteOh the braids... I'm not sure If I'll use them again, every time the Champion moves her hear I have to manually move them and takes some extra time, or even a re-render.
But I can see why you love the long haired breads!
Thanks to you for the feedback buddy
If such is the case then I'll continue to address myself as "Resident Long Hair Requester" haha.
DeleteDidn't realise that the braids would cause extra trouble, they definitely looked absolutely beautiful, but I understand if they don't come back due to them being extra trouble though. That being said, at the risk of seeming demanding, I genuinely hope that they do make that comeback! :D
Long-waiting chapter always surprise me.
ReplyDeleteTransformation sequence is fantastic! Especially demon to cow-hybrid and centaur!!
This chapter is really a worth-waiting one!
And for the record, I'm really interesting in the original style (demon-like creature). If that setting were used in series, that will be really tough and lustful for future story and your work loading....
Thanks for giving us this wonderful anniversary edition!!!
So glad to know after 26 chapters one can still suprise its fans! Thanks a lot!
DeleteYep. I wanted the demon-witcher but I would be forced to explore a lto more into her and probably add 5 more chapters... Or could I make a new comic sometime about a possesed witcher?
Thanks for the feedback!
Excellent fun, very well done and creative
ReplyDeleteThis was a GREAT chapter and I love the "guest character" you brought into it! Will we ever see the "Guest Character" again?
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteIt's likely. I have a big reunion planned, I'm just considering if it's worth it and if it's not so time demanding to make
This was really spectacular! It's quite a change seeing Martin now transform others against their will. I like where this is going and I've enjoyed every chapter. Thank you!!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much! The character needed to evolve a bit. Enough of being pushed around
DeleteIt's a really great chapter, and transformation sequence is awesome!
ReplyDeleteWish for more chain transform sequence like this.
Last page looks like the Minotaur in mountain area?? Maybe Martin can get some pepper to grow what he desperately wish for. lol
Yah... The minotaurs have arrived!!
DeleteThanks!
Great one again, really like the comic was hoping for the Bimbo Liqueur to make another appearance ! Can we expect to see it again in a form or another by the end of this series :P BTW, I really like the story you're building but after 3 years I kinda start to miss your other stories/comics/ideas can't for for the Halloween one. Have a nice day !
ReplyDeleteThanks! I also want to start new things, that why I'm cutting a big part of the original story I had in mind.
DeleteI think we'll see the liqueur in action once again...
Really like how martin changed his opponent after the fight its a good twist to the story nope she returns as martins submissive mount as it would be nice to see more of this dominating side of martin.
ReplyDeleteWe got some chapters left... We might see him in dominatrix action once more
DeleteI like the look of the original idea for Gerard, I think it fits him better
ReplyDeleteThe demon Gerard? I think that too, but, I lack the time and manpower to porperly develop it and integrate it to the story
Deleteif you ever go for another long story i recommend streamlining it a bit more, i feel like this just got weirder and weirder as it went on with no real focus or story (why is the witcher even here?). honestly its amazing to watch an actual story adventure as a comic, but theres a few things missing along the way.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback. I guess it felt that way because, after 3 years and with so much content I want to put in it.
DeleteAbout the Witcher... It's just for fun and to bring something fresh.
So one-eyed for the rest of the series? Hopefully not, I really don't like that.
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I find it a sexy badass eyepatch. But Can't say it'll stay until the end
DeleteWell, I guess I never seen any appeal in that. Losing an eye is a serious disability, nothing sexy about that. As far as eye patch goes, you can still keep it with eye intact. Sailors and pirates often have worn eye patches over healthy eye, to have it accustomed to darkness whenever they needed to quickly go below the sun deck to lower decks where it was really dark for example.
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At the same time, I do understand the need to show lasting effects of a fight. So maybe instead of completely preventing the healing, just make it so that it does heal very slowly, taking a chapter or more for the eye to recover.
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the jury is still out rergarding the eyepatch. I'm checking the feedback on it, thanks for the suggestins!
DeleteHi Vip
ReplyDeleteThis chapter is one of my favourite (with the chapter 21)
I love how the sword's curse change the face (big tongue hmmmm) and mind of Martin.
Mixed with effects of the bimbo liqueur, its giving a really interessting corruption. Brillant idea!
Just curious : despite the cursed oil, is there a little chance for Martin to recover her eye ?
As always, worth the wait :) The quality is everywhere (rendering,story, tf...)
Thank you for your work !
Thanks!
DeleteRegarding the eye, there is a change of recovering it. I think she looks badass, but I might make a poll via patreon to see if she recovers it
VIP, what a great chapter and surprise. Gerald (huge Witcher fan btw) turning...epic!. The detail was absolutely stunning. I love the muscle tone. Who needs MMA with fight scenes like these ;) I am still picking my eyes up from the floor after that Centaur transformation. Since I am a fan of Succubi, Gerald as one looked great. If you make the eyes and teeth of the succubus model subtler , I think the succubus will be really something mind blowing. Thanks for all your hard work and creativity.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much! I put some effort on that fight. It was a lot longer than I'm used to make.
DeleteSuccubi Gerard would have been nice, indeed her teeth are too big and the eyes could use some glow to be less snake-like.
Hey VipC, greetings from Germany.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the work taken to make this chapter, it shows!
The fight with Gerard and the outcome was really entertaining, and the transformation quite wild. I feel a little bit sad by the fact that he didn't undergo the alternative transformation, but only because it looked amazing, while the one that happened loses by only a little bit.
Again, wonderful chapter, I can't wait to see the story develop to its end.
Cheers!
Danke!
DeleteI liked it better too, but as I stated, it was a bit complex to make and It would've meant that Demon Gerard would've stayed as a companion, and that was heavy extra work
I confess I would have preferred 'Gerard' to turn into/stay more of a sexbomb like on page 58 or 63 rather than become a centaur, but I'd love to see even her centaur form come back later. Maybe even more sexualized?
ReplyDeleteJust as Martin's changes started to feel somewhat difficult to relate to his/her earlier male self, you do this. I loved seeing a tough male character get turned into a horny slut by Martin. Wouldn't mind seeing something like that happen again, either in CoC or in a future unrelated comic.
This chapter was easily one of the best ones of this whole series.
Thank you very much for finding it that good!
DeleteA change of space was needed. He's been a horny sissy for far too long, the realm's bitch, now it was time to get some active evil behaviour.
Regarding Gerard, one option was to leave him as a female, and TF him in the next chapter after losing a big battle with the minotaurs. But... This was anniversary edition and deserved to be big sized
Was expecting some futa action between both of them. :P
ReplyDeleteWe had a lot of futa action, some good old fashioned lesbo action won't hurt right?
DeleteAwesome chapter. Glad to see she finally won again. Sucks that she lost her eye. Is it possible to steal an eye? Is she going to become more violent due to the swords affects. Was it a slower change due to not killing only wounding? Is the blood lust going to continue. Is her wings going to grow. And is she going to read to gain powers like the witches.she grabbed the witcher's stuff bso is she going to drink any potions consciously or subconsciously?
ReplyDeleteMhm... You're asking for too many spoilers in the very few chapters we have left!
DeleteI haven't decided on the eye recovery. I like the badass eyepatch, but it can be a turnoff. The sword makes her more violent, yes, but not so much next time because the sword's hunger for blood has been satisfied a little. she used the witcher potion on the witcher, take its gems, and left the rest behind
Is she going to be more demonic? And it seems to me she is starting to be more like ceraph? Which is aa total 360. So if she becomes more succubi like will she have ceraph like powers? Are we going to see Marti kill finally?
ReplyDeletea 360° change in direction means it doesn't changed direction at all LOL!
DeleteThere will be a change of behaviour, after all, it's becoming corrupted past redemption.
DeleteI have no plans to give her any of Ceraph's powers
Nice chapter. Centaur TF is awesome! I hope we will meet poor Gerard again.
ReplyDeleteWe just might!
DeleteLol I meant 180
ReplyDeleteI understood it anyway, it happens to all of us at least once in our lifes!
DeleteHello, bob10 here.
ReplyDeleteFirst thanks for your awesome work, this chapter was one of your best IMO. the changes induced by the cursed sword are a very nice idea, I hope the sword will change Martin more.
For the minotaur, do you plan to include Excellia in a furture chapter ?
And finally I love Gerard's domon form, maybe she could appear in a sequel or in another chapter, having used potions to try to regain her previous form and ending up into a mad demon driven with revenge?
Hey Bob! thanks for the feedback!
DeleteWe might see Excellia, yes. We are going to see the Monotaur King for sure!
I don't know if I'll be using Demon Geral't form in this comic... Maybe in a new one I will, I liked the result.
This update was so good.
ReplyDeleteI'd love to see Gerard come back. She could be trying to cure herself and accidentally turn herself into the demon form. Although a sexier version would be better than the scary one, imo.
Yeah it was scary - just imagine a blowjob going wrong with those teeth!
DeleteVIP quick question is it possible if you can put that model you sent me in a jack in the box so I can try having it made into a caption. Your the only person I know who has the skills to do that haha. Please
ReplyDeletePlease refresh my memory, I don't remember when I senti you that model or what model it was (I'm a bit burned this days so much shit going on and so little sleep!)
DeleteIt's this one https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-f88p3XGzT2c/XJFSF35yPQI/AAAAAAAAcB8/naWWDpuciJU28AephjS_DG0_RLDhl0FqgCLcBGAs/s1600/c5.png I been trying to find someone to make the caption, so far I've found no one so it looks like I'll make it then. I just don't know how to put this model in a box
DeleteI think i have a box I can render, but it has no crane. Right now I'm a bit short on time, The costume is taking every spare second I have!
DeleteYeah that can work and I can wait after your done,I'm in no hurry. I wish I knew how to do it myself, but you're the only one I know who knows how
Deletefua que capitulo!! cuantos capítulos mas quedan? 2 o 3? o este era el ultimo? ya que quedo medio inconcluso, tengo entendido que va a terminar en la fabrica no es así? y perfecto la versión que tomaste de gerald así podes acortar capítulos, se acerca el gran final! después de tantos años! posta te lo digo enserio, me gustaria ver en el futuro cómics no porno creados por vos, ya que te gusta el genero TF podrías hacer algo similar a las historias de DA como knights of the grey city o shattered stars o la gran inmensidad de buenas historias de DA jaja claro eso necesitaria una render farm y una banda de gente en vez de 1 solo quien sabe.
ReplyDeletepregunta aparte que trabajos has hecho sacando vipcaptions como profesional? ya que si la calidad de esto es increible no me quiero imaginar trabajos para grandes companias si es que hay. trabajaste en alguna película de animación tipo disney o algo así?
Hola Jaim como andas?
DeleteGracias por los cumplidos! No, no trabaje para ninguna compañia, ni hice trabajos profesionales en 3D - mi trabajo real no puede ser mas distinto! Esto es un hobby - mas bien un vicio para mi. Tampoco podr{ia, el tiempo y costo del equipo que se necesita sería demasiado.
Quedan, estimo 3 capitulos (quizas uno mas por los 2 finales alternativos) y demasiadas cosas que dejo afuera! Pero CoC debe terminar alguna vez ya deje demasiadas ideas pospuestas por este comic.
will we ever get to see sissy martin again? that pathetic loser was was my fave. they were so ashamed but couldn't help getting worse :)
ReplyDeleteWith 3/4 chapters left, we might see him fall and rise once again
DeleteI think it would be cool if the main female character transformed into a centaur
ReplyDeletethanks! I must admit that has been a possibility since I acquired the Centaur model. But it's quite hard to do it because I used special textures for the Champion and they do not work well with the centaur model.
DeleteAgain, really awesome work. Another fun chapter to read.
ReplyDeleteBut I gotta say, some of these panels look fantastic: the veins, the textures, the lighting. Although best of all are the boob and hair physics, they really make the characters come alive. Making the large breasts sag and swing strongly adds to the immersion and believability of all the crazy stuff that happens in the story.
Thank you Vipcaptions for amazing work and dedication to this exciting story of our champion, Martin, that I have grown to love so much. I wish you a wonderful day.
Thanks a lot! It's nice to see that the extra time dedicated to move those individual body parts and even correct them in photoshop after rendering them pays off.
DeleteHave a great day you too!
Other than the eye patch I loved this chapter am curious where this will go her ego has gotten huge it is hot would love to see AKBAL return and corrupt her into his
ReplyDeleteOof! that eye patch is bringing controversy! I'll let the patreon supporters decide what's going to happen to it.
DeleteYes, her ego has gone high... Her confidence is through the roof, maybe being that confident will make her make a mistake
I am going to go against the norm but considering the world the comic is taking place in, I am more fond of the "Crazy demonic Gerard" over the centaur. My justification is that Witchers are already half mutated through alchemy, and he is of the wolf school.
ReplyDeleteI will admit I have a bias towards wings.
thanks! Sadly at this point I'm forced to take hard choices use my time more wisely, and not carrying him for the next chapters was one of the choices I had to make, just like a couple of chapters that would not appear or will be barely present at the background
DeleteThank you for bringing the world to life!
ReplyDeletethanks you for the comment, I do enjoy this hobby of mine a lot!
DeleteI love your artwork
DeleteYou're artwork is amazing, but I feel as though Martin needs his or her breast enhance to a gigantic size, engorged with massive amounts of milk and also extra veiny, like I also think you need a black woman named Olivia, with her nipples plugged like to keep her milk in,an milking machines to top it all off, she can also have her breast rival Martin's gigantic breast or bigger. Constantly milked, lact-aid after lact-aid, her nipples plugged and nipples locked off causing pressure to build up in her chest causing painful expansion, thicker viens to show her breast are on the verge of eruption, sweet milk goes everywhere. Then you can add Olivia family,husband Marvin and son Tiny who is a gigantic young black man. You can also have them run a dairy farm with Marvin as the head farmer and then Martin and Olivia are put in cowprint latex suits just having there huge breast milked, and there milk being will be sold to large towns and city, after 3 bottles of lact-aid of course. Olivia then rubs Martin's breast down while he or she is being milked with a new breast expansion cream she made from lact-aid and the harpes saliva,and yes the same harpe from the recent part with the huge tits Marvin and Tiny uses the harpe for breeding purposes, she's bent over and pounded as she's hooked up to an milking machine, gagged and full of lact-aid as well. Olivia and Martin have a milk off to see who can produce the most milk, Marvin hooks the ladies up to the milking machines and the contest begins, Martin doesn't know what happens next untill he see Marvin's giant black cock enters his wife Olivia asshole and is rammed hard Martin's pussy gets wet, from hearing her moan.Then Tiny gets behind Martin, Martin feels something heavy looks back it's Tiny oversized cock. Tiny takes a little bit of the harpe saliva rubs it on his cock it gets monsterus and then insert that monster cock in side Martin's asshole and is fucked really hard ladies receive a massive anal creampies. Oliva wins and still gives a very special gift to Martin but, Martin lost and will receive the gift after 5 days of being milked straight. Tiny comes around breeds both the harpe and Martin assholes from time to time to get more milk out the ladies that are gagged and still in cow print latex suits. Olivia gives Martin 3 bottles of regeneration potions, Martin takes it an drinks one and his eye is restored and what wounds he had once are gone. Martin then says ( let me stay for awhile with Tiny, I can help around the farm and my breast are still very full so the extra money wouldn't hurt.) Marvin (Martina that sounds great ideal welcome to the family.)
ReplyDeletefirst of all: thanks a lot for ther feedback!
DeleteSecond: Holy shit, you really gave it some thought!
I like the idea, it can work by itself outside the comic. In fact it should be a stand alone comic, or if you are willing to put on some time, a full story!
About the extremely gigantic breasts, I can make them gigantic, but applying that kind of transformations screws up the model a lot. Most poses look weird, parts of the body go through other parts, clothes don't fit or simply deform, and they can barely move. IF martin's breasts are to become extra big, they can't stay like that for too long.
It's just to save the Dairy Farm
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ReplyDeleteHell yes I'll love to do a stand alone comic with you.
DeleteOh I almost forgot to say The family relates to Martin as Martina cause they don't believe that his a man. Then Martin agrees to save the farm but doesn't knows what he got himself into but he forgets to take the scholars tea lol. Hell yeah, of course I'll love to help you out man, love your artwork.
ReplyDeleteSand mother would buy some of Marvin dairy farm milk and enjoys it, so much that she remembers Martin's huge tits bounce around leaking milk from her big clogged up nipples.
ReplyDeleteShe buys the milk at Moo's-Moo's and sees Martin tits swing around tits leaking puddles of milk, she feels aroused and very horny.
DeleteSo she leaves all turned on back to her lair to suckle down her milk slaves. Tiny is heart broken cause Martina had to leave in the middle of the night. To go back on her quest to continue her adventure. Marvin and his wife Olivia are so happy that they have 13 years worth of milk money to sit on for the rest of there lives there rich 3 large very large cylos of milk. Olivia realize they have even more money cause of her breast expansion cream. Tiny goes has rough sex with the harpy while she still being milked and full of milk. That will end the chapter there so would you think of this little side adventure.
ReplyDeleteJust a really sexy little scene have Martin unclogg Olivia's breast by removing her nipple pluggs an reaching in her breast to unclogg her milk ducts I thought the story may need a nipple f fuck scene.
ReplyDeleteThat's when they first meet though on the farm. Olivia breast expand just a little bit and Martin helps put her nipple pluggs in.
ReplyDeleteOlivia has enough money to open up her cafe and bakery it's called Moo's-Moo's in the town we're Martin works if he's not on the farm being milked, he's there getting those huge breast drained by customers as well as Olivia there's a lot of mouths to feed breast milk coffee, hot chocolate and sweets are made with there delicious milk. Marvin sells the breast expansion cream called (Wonder Bust) and the Harpy's saliva called (Krave) lubricant for men, in town for Olivia and gets a lot of gold back 500,000 her products are flying off the shelf business is going good for the family. Tiny run a black Smith shop and he is the one that's responsible for the milking machines being built and repaired at the farm and at the cafe Tiny is a highly intelligent man and has super strenght as well as father Marvin but Marvin was an ex adventure as well, that's how he met his wife Olivia who was a wet nurse at a local hospital she was addicted to being milked like Martin, that's how they become good friends. Olivia breast milk also has healing powers that explains the regeneration potions that were given to Martin even though he lost by a landslide.
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ReplyDeleteI know this really out of order but what's your honest opinion. Cause I really like to see this in the comic. Any more info just let me know I'll keep cranking out ideals from there.
DeleteMartin also receives his payment for saving the farm and helping the restaurant before he leaves. Martin gets 750,000 gold for his services then he leaves in the middle of the night on his quest. Tiny packs Martin a new set of very sexuall armor breast of course are hanging out with nipple covers, new shield that can absorb energy and send it back to the enemy like an shockwave and of course a new sword that's unbreakable and can harness the power of the sun for extra fire damage against his enemies.
ReplyDeleteThe armor turns Martin invisible if she lactates into the nipple covers. The Sand mother was waiting for Martin at the bridge on the outside of the town. She says to Martin, (my offer still stands, you will become a milk slave) Martin says (up yours) and they battle. Martin's breast start to get heavy cause there filling up with so much milk as the battle carries on, Martin starts to fill pains in his breast, there starting to expand fast martin says (gawddamnit not now). Sand mother push forward then her breast starts to leak like a faucet expanding hard, lack of milking herself, panicking and trying to hold her milk in and Martin sees an opportunity to strike his breast erupt like an broken water hose. Sand mother in confusion wondering where the big titty cow went Martin relizes he's invisible. The Sand mother and her minions retreat leaving a very large milk trail. Martin gets to thinking about following them to ambush them at there lair. Then Martin thanks Tiny for looking out for her and kinda regets leaving without that last fuck lol.
ReplyDeleteOne more thing I have to say bot Marvin and Tiny have super strenght and Tiny has super intelligence but Marvin has extreme senses such as super Sonic hearing, can smell a person from 5 miles away, can also see in the dark and from afar. Olivia maybe an wet nurse but she actually a fairy but she doesn't know it that's why she can make any type of potion and she enchant armor, shields,swords and etc. This why Martin has out standing gear now, this was Tiny and Olivia going away present for Martin.
ReplyDeleteThe beginning
ReplyDeleteMartin see a town in the distance, so he gets a little closer to the bridge of the town. He then hears an horse and carriage behind him. He sees on the carriage two very strong black men. Marvin says ( hi there little lady, you heading into town, well don't just stand there, hop on up we'll give you a ride). My name's Marvin and this I my son Tiny. Tiny says (hello there nice to meet you, your very pretty lady.) Tiny then keep sneeking peeks at Martin's oversized breast. They get to town and pick up some groceries and some farm supplies. They get back to the carriage Martin looks hungry and exhausted, then Marvin says to Martin ( well listen little lady we normally don't do this but your welcome to come and stay with us as long as you want, but you can stay at an inn here but there expensive but it's your call). Martin agrees to stay with the guys, and they head out to the dairy farm.
They get to the dairy farm and unpack the groceries and supplies and go in the house. Martin is amazed at how beautiful their house is, Marvin says (you like it, well my wife decorated it). Marvin tells Martin to go and say hi to his wife in the green house. So Martin heads to the green house to meet Olivia. Before all that Tiny shows Martin his room and tells Martin there food in the kitchen if you want to grab a quick bite. Martin takes a shower and Tiny stairs at Martin big booty and tight wet cunt Tiny licks his lips sexually and grabs his massive black cock and says (I would love to rip that ass and that pussy apart). Martin gets dressed and heads outside to the green house to meet Olivia. Martin opens up the door and the little bell goes off a startles Olivia. Olivia tells Martin to hurry and cover her face with the rag, she tells Martin about the special yellow flowers that are glittery. She tells Martin that they have a very strong smell that makes your sex drive crazy, causing multiple orgasmic pleasures. Olivia tells Martin about the ingredients for her breast expansion cream and explains the other two ingredients are lact-aid and harpy saliva and lacto-gasms. Martin then realizes that this beautiful black goddess is addicted to lactating and milking herself like him.
ReplyDeleteOlivia and Martin head outside and to a very large shade tree. Martin stears at Olivia huge ass and she turns around for the first time and Martin is shocked her breast are bigger than his. Martin notice her breast were so full of milk that her veins were throbbing and leaking milk. Olivia face look like she was really in discomfort,and Martin knew why. Olivia says to Martin,(can you do me a big favor can you unclogg my nipples my breast are killing me). Martin says (what how can that be possible). Olivia says (just pull my nipple pluggs out and reach both hands in my breast and unclogg my milk ducts silly). That's the nipple fisting fuck scene 😊.
ReplyDeleteOlivia tells Martin that was the best lacto-gasms she had in awhile. They enter the house and see the men in very serious conversation about losing the dairy farm and they have six months to make enough money to keep the farm and pay of there debts to the bank. Martin says (I'll help it's at I can do for all the hospitality). The family agrees with Martin statement, Marvin tells Martin to meet them tomorrow morning at the dairy barn. Martin forgets to drink his scolars tea before he goes to bed and forgets again when he makes it to the dairy barn in the morning. Martin sees the harpy gigantic tits being milked. The men turn around and sees Martin's hair is blonde, Martin says (oh no). Martin makes the worse mistake every he looks down and see two 36" black monster cocks. The bimbo returns and the breast expansions begins.
ReplyDeleteHey, if you have any concept character designs for Olivia,Marvin, and Tiny from ,hairstyles,skin colors,general clothing, kinky latex cow print clothing and face designs just email me,just click on (Marvino) and it'll show my email address and you can send me these designs and I can choose from there and also help out with other great projects such as story wise.
ReplyDeleteI almost forgot there is some employees at moo's-moo's only three girls plus Olivia and Martin that works there. I have found some good kinky outfits that they can were at moo's-moo's, and how the milking machine can be designed plus the latex cow suits as well. The employees are one rabbit female morph named Cleo, then there's Ursula, who is also a wet nurse like Olivia and finally Amanda who is a very addicted to lactating.
ReplyDeletePart 2 is the extreme breast expansion and brutal milking for the harpy, Martin and Olivia, then the milking contest between Martin and Olivia. Then part 3 is they make enough money to save the ranch but, Olivia opens a restaurant up and business is going well and with her sex merchandise. Part 4 is were the (sand mother, sand with and the shemale returns for the milk and the shop closes). This is also part 4 (down below), this is the very beginning at least 3 to 4 pages so dig in and let hear some feedback. Then part 5 is living in the middle of the night and encounters the sand mother and they battle and Martin follows the sand mother milk trail to there lair after there retreat.
ReplyDeleteMartin wakes up after the brutal milking contest and sees his breasts full, bloated, aching, throbbing and barely can see his on feet there massive. Martin walks from his bed to the mirror in the bathroom and notice his hair is blonde, Martin freaks out and rushes to his pack to find his scolars tea to rid himself of the bimbo effect. Martin upstairs getting ready to leave and be back on his adventure. Martin heads down stairs, Olivia cuts him off at the end of the staircase with a super happy face along with the rest of the family. Her gigantic black breasts dipping milk onto the hardwood floor. Olivia says (we didn't Martina we save the farm and cleared are debt with the bank, thank so much Martina). Martin says you're welcome, then Martin looks at what Olivia is wearing it's a very reviling outfit. Martin stears at Olivia with her nipple pluggs in and she has a cowbell choker on with a cowprint body harness on with high heels to match. Olivia catches Martin eyes and then says you like my outfit it's for the grand opening of my new restaurant, Martin says restaurant yeah Marvin replied with your help Martina we made enough money my wife opened up her own restaurant tell him honey. Oliva says Moo's-Moo's it's a cafe and bakery and a sex shop in the back I sell my cream and the Harpy's saliva there. Martin says that's great, um said Olivia says to Martin here you go as promised 750,000 gold your share, but Martina do you want to make some extra gold. Martin hell yeah, Olivia tells him well can you work with me at my resturrest for awhile there's gold in it,Martin well sign me up what do I have to do says Martin, Olivia well see what I'm wearing this is the uniform. Martin says are you serious Mrs. Olivia this very reveling your tits are out. Olivia says I know that that's easy excess to your milk. Martin's says why is that, Olivia says to pour into there coffee now hurry and change,the laddies have are all ready probably done got started. Martin change into the cowprint body harness and cowbell choker and heads down stairs in shame. Olivia says look at you, your beautiful and sexy but your forgetting something, Martin says what's that your nipple rings, these help control the milk flow and don't make giant messes or leaks the floor just a nice control milk flow for the customers.
ReplyDeleteAs Martin stands he feels his breasts backing up with pressure because of the reduce milk flow Martin's tits being to ache badly. Martin strats to groan in pain as the pressure builds he sees Marvin and Tiny head off in the distance to start plowing the fields with the horses. Olivia says to Martin come on were going to be late we beat start walking, Martin says walk Olivia says yeah it's only a mile Martin jaw drops, Olivia grabs Martin's arm and head out the door. As there entering the town the towns people smile and wink as they see these to huge breasted women coming through the town dripping milk from there nipples. Martin has one hand on the wall to hold himself up as he woddles in pain tits throbbing as they slap around back and forth pulsating badly as if there were going to burst at any second. Martin tells Olivia he can't make it Olivia tells yes you can and grabs Martin arm. Martin udders on the verge of eruption, Martin and Olivia breasts start to leak living streams of milk behind them. Martin looks back and sees a cats every drinking there milk up from puddles they left behind.
ReplyDeleteThe pressure is getting to Martin the nipple rings are backing up Martin's milk so fast that now his udders has grown since then there bright red and extra veiny. Martin says Olivia I'm about to explode any second now are we there, Olivia says to Martin yeah we are sweety there is an emergency milking machine behind the kitchen counter. Olivia hooks Martin up to the milking machine and turns it on to the max pumping out put, takes Martin's nipple rings off and puts the suction cups on his nipples. Martin let's out the biggest and loudest moo ever and has the biggest lacto-gasms ever the relentless milking cause Martin to pass out and droll all over his big red bloated and veiny tits. Martin awakes five hours later and sees three laddies hook up and shackled to a standing milking machine and being feed lact-aid through an hanging feeder. There udders were gigantic it reminded Martin of the spider web problem and Diego cutting him down. Olivia comes back in were she sees Martin has awoke, Olivia says you missed the grand opening it's rush hour now let me turn this off and get you unplugged, now put your nipple rings and start servicing some customers your milk. Martin walks up to an elderly man an politely ask do you want some milk sir, the man replied yes I do and squeezes Martin breast Martin let's a big moan out the as he moaned he moved as well. This continues for quite some time until closing time.
ReplyDeleteWhen the restaurant was closing Martin meets Moo's-Moo's herd I mean the employees lol. Martin and Olivia clean up the cafe tables and mop the floors while Marvin and Tiny in the back cleaning up the kitchen counter and washing the dishes. Olivia says damn I almost forgot you didn't meet the employees come on to the back and say hi. Martin heads to the kitchen the laddies still hook up to the milking machines moaning and groaning in pain there tits were enormous. There was a black woman named Cleo she is a wet nurse like Olivia, beautiful ebony skin tone and huge ass, but Cleo's breasts we're clogged up pretty badly Olivia says to Marvin and Tiny can you men help Ms Cleo out here she stopped up pretty good. With the mens super strenght Cleo's gigantic black tits were in luck, they squeeze her breasts until they explode milk, Ms Cleo's pussy got very wet from the lacto-gasm she received from releasing the intense pressure off her breasts bloated and veiny as well as Olivia's and Martin's. Next there was Bonnie she a cute little 18 year old rabbit morph girl who's breast has out grown her own body. Her extremely huge breasts left her the most out the girls the most exhausted out the three. Bloated backed up and just miserable because there's no milk coming out of her tits. She moans hard as her tits ache and throb Tiny turns the pumps to the max both Marvin and Tiny great one gigantic breast each Bonnie gets a super strenght squeeze of a lifetime Bonnie screams as her tits erupt milk like a geyser, the poor liilit rabbit couldn't handle the wave of pleasure so she passes out. Last but not least Amanda is the blonde with the most blazing blue eyes you'll ever see but she is the lact-aid junkie she loves lactating all the time and all the tits erupting around is turning her on, her big udders are extremely huge because she glub down two whole bottle of lact-aid. Amanda gets horny hurt cunts begging for her tits to erupt as well. Marvin ask Amanda you must want your tits milk too huh Amanda shakes her forward meaning yeas Marvin and Tiny grab these massive udders and squeeze as hard as they could Amanda lets the biggest moo of the night and has the strongest lacto-gasms that Olivia and Martin has ever had and or witness. Amanda goes insane with overwhelming pulsating pleasure she cums on the floor hard and drolls down her neck and on to her breasts.(P.S By the way have fun with Amanda, Bonnie, and Cleo you can extend this part of the comic I would love see your twist on this).
ReplyDeleteI messed up the names so just remembered Bonnie is the rabbit morph female her name is actually Cleo, and Cleo the wet nurse is actually named Ms. Ursula the black woman. Amanda is still the same character so you don't have to worry about her.
DeleteThen, Marvin and Tiny unhook the girls and tell them if they needed some more extra milking you can always come to the dairy farm the laddies replied okay we will. As the laddies walked into the distance three hooded people came in and said that they were traveling(This is the return of the Sand Mother, sand witch and the shemale one I forgot the name of her also this is the the part Marvin gives them the milk and they leave.) Marvin and Olivia head home and tells tiny an Martin to lock up the restaurant. Tiny gives Martin his money it was 1500 gold like the other laddies received. Tiny ask can you help me clean up the milking machines Martina, Martin replies sure thing. So Tiny and Martin clean up the giant milk puddles left behind on the floor and milk on the machines. Martin thinks to himself that's a lot of milk from those three laddies reminds me of me and Diego. Then Tiny puts his arms around Martin waist and says Tina the parents are gone so the can play now, he turns Martin around and kisses him picks Martin up and lays him down and pulls aside the body harness that covers her little tight pussy and Tiny starts licking and sucking Martin's clitoris and the Tony's big black cock got a nice hard erection for Martin's wet cunt. Martin sees this gigantic black cock for the first time as himself not as the bimbo he starts panicking he tells Tiny it won't fit Tiny tells him it fit last time in all three of your holes last time. Before Martin has a chance to react Tiny shoves that massive cock head into Martin's pussy. Martin starts to scream with ecstasy for every moan Tiny goes deeper and deeper form every groan he goes balls deep then Martin starts mooing like a cow in heat. Tiny grabs Martin by the hooves start thrusting harder and harder,meanwhile Martin is cumming all over Tiny's big black cock then Tiny cums deep inside Martin's womb, then Martin pulls Tiny head toward an kisses him. They lock up shop and Tiny picks up Martin and carries him home, Tiny says you probably can't walk with those breasts all nice and full huh Tina, Martin smile as he kisses him. Martin then realizes he has fallen for this titan of a man, he has to leave for good to become a man once again but Martin knows this will break Tiny heart cause he does have feeling for me but not me damnit I sorry Tiny.( After this Martin leaves in the middle of the night with the new armor, shield and sword and battles the Sand Mother and her minions that's part 5)
ReplyDeleteThen there is a part 2 to this cause Martin did in fact follow the Sand Mother milk trail back to her lair as they retreated from there battle. The main reason I did this story, because you left your audience with cliffhanger about the Sand Mother and her milk slaves, I felt that they did not really have a chance to shine in your comic. But I would love some major feedback and P.S your art is amazing.
ReplyDeleteIf you do decide to go along with this alternate comic can you make Oliva look like Nia Long, Marvin as Denzel Washington, and of course Tiny would be Jason Momoa just black with dreads. Then Ms. Cleo will be Halle Berry, and Amanda will be Christina Aguilera but with porn star Sara Jay big booty then Bonnie can be Ariana Grande.
ReplyDeleteOne more thing,in part 2 of the extreme breast expansion and the milking competition between Martin and Olivia, when Olivia wins and Martin losses and is left alone with the Harpy for 5 days straight, and is brutally milked and Tiny ravaging there assholes and cunts for 5 days. Have multiple sex scenes with Olivia and Marvin in this time period fucking hard, from deep throating blowjobs, doggy, cowgirl, reverse cowgirl, missionary, big creampies, and very big anal creampies. P.S your work is fantastic and don't forget to email me I have found some art work that will fit a lot of the characters I've came up with as far as the women breasts sizes, the latex gear that Martin,Olivia,and the Harpy, and last but not least of course the uniforms for Moo's-Moo's
ReplyDeleteShit, one main key factor with this story involving the return of the Sand Mother, the Sand Witch tells the Sand Mother that Martin was the one to force feed her milk and recognizes him in the cafe, as they leave the Sand Witch and the Shemale sets up the ambush to kidnap Martin. Martin leaves in the middle of the night of course gets to the bridge and the, Sand Mother and her minions are waiting for him, the Sand Mother then realizes that Martin's breasts are still gigantic and he has enough potential to become her milk slave so she tells Martin her offer still stands the shemale tells the Sand Mother I can take him Mother but Sand Mother says this is a battle between us and that's how the battle goes down. Martin in the middle of the fight he starts lactating into his nipple covers turning him invisible and with the Sand Mother breasts erupting like an fire hydrant after their battle her and her minions retreat the Sand Mother leaves a giant milk trail behind. Remember that both Martin's breasts are filling up with milk as the fight continues that's why he lactates after awhile a little expansion wave comes through and the Sand Mother breasts are expanding rapidly though out the fight because of lack of milking. Her minions carry her off while they both grab a breasts and start power sucking her milk out as there retreating the Sand Mother starts to moan hard in the middle of the retreat as her tits are being drained, Martin sees the huge milk trail then follows them to there lair carefully,this sets up part 2 of this comic. Let me know what you think of my ideal with this story and I'll do my very best to have part 2 in order for you, if want to continue with this side comic of course.
ReplyDeleteHoly shit! That was quite a complete story. And quite a long one, too. You really gave it some thought covering all the areas and little details. The milking contests, etc. such great ideas and funny ones too!
DeleteI'm going to stop you for a moment - I have so many comics waiting for CoC to end, that I doubt I'll ever make time for it to start a comic so heavily oriented in lactation.
As hard as it to say, and as bad as I feel after the incredible time you put on sharing such a complete script. Even more considering I wanted to explore the Sand Mother's coven a lot more when I was planning CoC but it had to be left out in order to finally finish the comic.
Hey,you can always come back to it but part 2 might be the best one I've came up with it's kinda short not as along as this one but its has a great beginning and ending for Martin.
DeleteNo biggie I was hoping it would be a big side quest, because of the cliffhanger with the Sand Mother. Then I already started a part 2 and its it's amazing.
ReplyDeleteIf you want to turn this into a different kind of rpg adventure comic from scratch I'll be more than enough help, you just use my story methods and come up with a new main character and change Martin's name out and you got yourself a new breasts expansion type adventure comic.
ReplyDeleteIf you do decide to go alone with this ideal I feel as though it should be a woman because I'm really not a fan of futa and shemales, that's just me and my opinion thougn.
ReplyDeleteShe should be a warrior or an archer named Ingrid or Xenia and have the shape of pornstar Kelly Divine, almond colored hair and gorgeous green eyes. Her personality is she is a little bit to curious about things, very clumsy, and has very high sex drive also has a very huge breast size she is an O cup. Also she has a high pain tolerance (that will be put to the test of multiple breasts expansions and milking she will indor on her adventures.) she is going to be one sexy ass redhead.😁
ReplyDeleteShe should be a Knight or an Marksman named Ashanti or Kenya and have the shape of pornstar Roxy Reynolds, with black hair and gorgeous eyes. Her personality is that, she is a little bit rambunctious (brawler-type), very sexy, and has very high sex drive, also has a very huge breast size she is an V cup,(but that rambunctious attitude of hers will be put to the test of multiple breasts expansions and milking as she will indor on her adventures.) she is going to be one sexy ass black woman.😁
DeleteRoxy Reynold would be better suited as an amazon using a spear in my mind!
DeleteOh, okay I can see that
DeleteBut I feel as though an assassin build would be better bow and arrows, and a pair of short swords.
DeleteYou just have to come up with the name of this breast expansion filled lactation
ReplyDeletedriven adventure comic. Then my friend we can work on making this perverted masterpiece together. Hell I can make a couple changes in part 2 of my CoC for Martin and make this fit this character adventures. What do you say would you like to work with me on bringing my stories to life with your amazing talents.
I thought of something, how about we do a alternate ending, like a (what if saga) I understand that Martin is going to become a man once again. That can be the good ending of the comic, then mines can be the bad ending for the comic as Martin stays as the succubus and marries Tiny( part 2 spoiler). Just make a couple of small changes to the succubus battle, with Martin losing but keep when he kicks Diego's ass, and the Witchter scene, then cut the rest out and use my stories instead. Then the story will pick up with Martin traveling and sees a town over the horizon. Then then breasts expansion extravaganza begins.😁😊😁
ReplyDeleteWell... I don't know why you assume he'll be a man again... the jury is still out on that one, he could end as it is now, as futa, or as a man!
DeleteAnd it will have alternate endings. at least two endings in total, but I have 4 in mind actually.
the one thing I know for sure is once the comic is over, That's it for Martin. No more adventures for him. If I ever return to the CoC realm it will be a new adventurer, or a son, or something else. and after CoC, it's a change of scenery: future scifi or modern I think. I need the variety
I still think the same about your idea: Honest opinion, I still believe you have a good idea but it's for something new, starting from scratch, and heavily focused on lactation, maybe a bit too much, needs something in the middle. It will require quite a lot of backgrounds and characters too!
Okay I get it let's start from scratch then, like what exactly in the middle.
DeleteBut if you didn't like my ideals though you could have told me to fuck off! I would have gotten the message real clear, that my story didn't matter at all for the CoC adventure. It's cool though at least now I get where the story is going.
DeleteI did not disliked your idea, I took the time to read them and gave you my honest feedback. I would never say fuck off to anyone.
DeleteLately, as you can see, my time has been limited and I can't strech myself too much. CoC is facing its final 3/4 chapters and I am excited to move on, not expand it.
Okay cool, man I apologize to you bro. I didn't get a clear picture. My fault my man just do your thing.
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