Saturday, February 25, 2017

Corruption of the Champion, part 13!!!!!


Yesss!! I made it!!! It's finally done!!!!

So it took a while, I know it. I assume that from now on it will take around a month for each new part, I have used all the pre-renders I had, but hey, let's focus on the chapter being released today... the jinxed number, number 13!

But #13 can't be that bad. After all, after the long wait, it features a 61 pages long chapter, and even has an after credits scene (Ha! Marvel hero movies, you have nothing on me, suckers!)

I will try to make the chapters shorter. Sometimes they drag for too long in production and I loose focus.

So... where did we left our hero the last time?

Uhm.. not bad... but I think it's time our Champion sees some familiar faces... Who could it be??


Don't waste any more time! Get it here:

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Some short news!
Starting chapter 14, I'll start adding the images posted on the CoC Art Contest.
Damn, they are good!
And remember, the contest is still open for your submission if you want to give a hand or get involved!

Thanks for all the feedback and all the art you submitted, guys! Really. Hope you enjoy this part!

142 comments:

  1. Oh, parte 13 liberada... hora de descargar y leer .... muchísimas gracias vip. Saludos desde México ;)

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    1. De nada! espero lo disfrutes, dime que te pareció

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    1. He literally just added one chill bruh.

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    2. Next month probably.
      Great chapter by the way!

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  3. Very nice and subtle for this chapter. Willthe new piercing change anything about her? We will have to see. But damn dude i cant wait for the next installment. So excited.

    Wheni saw jinxed chapter above i thought imediately to jinxxxed. Now i have to go back and read it again haha.

    As a question, will she be getting any of that whisker fruut to make her a bit more feline? That was always a favorute of mine...

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    1. Thanks!
      I'm actually debating myself on that. There's still a couple more of transformative items due to come, Mainly because I don't like the whiskers on her face

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    2. I meant more for the feline shaped face,cat ears, paw hands or claws.

      The paw hands could make her dexteruty a bit off for future fights ;)

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  4. It's like a drug, everytime I wanna see more and more. Great work! p.s. I wish to see main character more corrupted)

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    1. Thanks AHAJIbruH4uK! For me it's like a drug too, I love making it I just wish it would be done faster

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  5. THANKS, GOOOOOD MAN, I LOVE YOU, I WAIT NEW PART!!!!!!!!!!! SHIT MAN YOU DO MY DAY WOWOWOWOWOWOW AHAHWOWOWO

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    1. WOWOOW YOU'RE WELCOOOMEEE!!!
      WOW you seem happy, it's contagious! Glad you liked it

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  6. You're cool) Thank you for the work done, I can not imagine anyone in the next turn, Martin)

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    1. Next time we'l lsee more familiar faces around - and what that piercing and tattoo will force out Champion to do

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  7. Finally! I can't wait to get home and read it.

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    1. Great! Tell me if you liked it

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    2. I did! Keep them coming, they're great.

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  8. As awesome as always, thank you very much!

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    1. Thanks you for taking the time to leave a reply

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  9. Se ha echo esperar. Ahora a disfrutarlo.

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  10. Nice work vip !
    Can't work next chapter :p

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    1. I meant wait* ^^

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    2. Thanks! And let's never again speak of work!

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  11. Tu que sabes de bebidas. Me tome una de estas https://goo.gl/photos/3GdYwfwhjnYLLWYE9 mientras leía tu cómic. Crees que me afectará igual que a Martin? XD

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    1. JA! buena bebida para este comic!
      No se... dine si la habitacion se siente mas grande que antes de beberla? Y por las dudas, ten sexo seguro - no quieres estar tirando goblins por alli, ya ves de que son capaces!

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    2. Solo me hizo crecer un poco la barriga cervecera.
      Después de ver tanto goblin casi me planteo plastificarla XD

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  12. i have jsut one censure, why u didnt put piercings on both of her nipples? but nice work as usually ;)

    and can i ask, what program do you use for 3d models and for creating scenes?

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    1. OH, the answer is simple:
      1) every time I change the model pose I have to manually adjunt the piercing, so two piercing would take longer time and more work
      2) Look it this way: there's still a nipple left to put another cursed piercing on!

      I use DAZ Studio for creating 3D comics

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    2. i somehow hoped, the another cursed piercing would be on her cock ( the one who forbid her to attack) or do u plan to put some other curses on her?

      and do u also use DAZ for creating models/ characters, or do u use another software?

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    3. No, I only use DAZ and a bit of photoshop to polish the final images after they're rendered

      The piercings have their effect no matter where you put them!

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  13. Hey, vip! Capítulo incrível, como sempre! Estou adorando a série. Mas sabe, tenho sentido falta dos seus captions recentemente. Não estou cobrando, é só que AMO suas histórias e sinto falta de uma leiturinha rápida mas excelente XD Espero não ter soado mal, aliás!
    De qualquer forma, obrigado pelo ótimo trabalho! Abraços do Brasil!

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    1. Ei! Desculpe o meu português está enferrujado ... Vou ter que usar o Google Translate para responder.
      Sim, estou seriamente atrasado em Captions. Só falta o tempo livre ultimamente. A mini série deste ano, no entanto, acho que vou lançá-la em março enquanto esperamos pelo capítulo 14

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  14. I received a notice of undelivered message and I'm not sure if it was not my email for you. Did you get my email?

    Edvin

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    1. Hi Edvin I get you email, I'll reply you after I've finished reading the comments

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  16. Aww man. So the contest is over? And I just finished the picture. Oh well. I'll post it

    http://protogetsbuckets.tumblr.com/image/157758357028

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    1. No, Jose, it says at the botton of the post "the contest is still open"!
      But I did get your contribution and I'll reply you on the contest entry

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  17. Cuando harás captions?

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    1. Vengo retrasado con las captions, verdad?
      Supongo que haré algunas (la mini-serie de este año por ejemplo) en los proximos dias para subir algo antes del capítulo 14

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  18. Do you keep any lossless versions of these comics like PNGs somewhere (Preferably ones without any text added)?

    I'm asking because i noticed a lot of typos, grammatical errors or weird phrasing throughout all the chapters that i'd like to fix, but editing from lossy jpegs and then re-compressing the fixed version would lead to quality loss i would like to avoid if possible.

    Also, instances where non-english text is added directly on top of the images (a lot of instances in this chapter) would be almost impossible to "fix" on 3D renders, because they can't be easily redrawn like on 2d mangas. This also makes in extremely hard to translate the comic into other languages and have it look at least half way professionally done.

    Anyway, keep up the good work, as i've been enjoying this comic tremendously, even though my perfectionist nature wishes i could help improve it ;)

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    1. Hi Axilia, I have some .pngs saved, they're raw renders, but not enough to make a full chapter, and each one of them weights like 10 Mb each

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  19. V.I.P. again you shown your work, it's through the roof. i love the amount of details in the skin of the champion, the blood veins under the skin, the faces our champion makes, the back grounds with detail in them too, not just noise; and the story is never the same the character grows over time not just in body; and the comedy i can't help but laugh with the goblin fight.
    "Although shocked when he found they where his, he killed his kids; so much for father/mother of the year."
    I love this chapter thank you for your hard work, nothing is easy what you are doing.
    Thank you for everyone that made a pic in the contest i love your work too.

    ps. wings, our champion needs wings ;p and red hair lol "never going to give up!"

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    1. Thanks a lot!
      I admit the part with the football kick was something I add because I find it funny, not being sure if it was...
      Thanks also for noticing the details of her skin. It takes an extra couple of minutes to render with those details, but I love how it looks, my only worry is that the lesser detail of the rest of the characters will be noticeable from time to time
      The contest is going fine, when I asked to simply "draw for free" I expected less than 3 contributions, but we got 5 or 6 already

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  20. Наконец-то! Thanks vip, great work:)

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    1. Да, это заняло какое-то время, не так ли? Спасибо за комментарий!

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  21. Once again you have not only succeeded in creating high quality content, but delivered a personal favorite of mine. :) Phenomenal work!

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    1. PErsonal favorite... piercing, tattoo, goblins? Wich one?
      Thanks for the comment!

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  22. Great work again! Love this story up to now! cant wait till part 14!

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    1. Thanks voidhead78, I'll try to make it as soon as possible

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  23. I haven't read it yet, but I'm hoping our hero grows balls and keeps the vagina.
    Even if that doesn't happen I will gladly masturbate to this chapter like I have all the others.

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    1. Wow, too much information!!!!
      But thanks, of course

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  24. Great work again man, really cool chapter, I like the new piercing but actually the tattoo is what I loved the most this time, I can't wait to see what the tattoo effect is or if it even has one, if not it still is an awesome add, I hope next time he changes outfit, grows another pair of boobs or at least becomes less muscular *¬*, but of course it's only a wish, you go your way XD

    Take all the time you want and need for the next chapter, after all you are the first person you have to make happy and with such a great final result I don't know why people complain

    Anyway until next time and keep up the great work =D

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    1. Thanks a lot!
      Of course that tattoo has magical powers, but they'll manifest in the next chapter

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  25. OMG don't take it wrong but actually I liked it better how the slave is gonna end up than how the champion is doing right now >w< do you by any chance have a full size render of the purple gal that we can download please O///w///O. Also I cant wait to see what the cum witch does to Martin, I hope she has some elixir with her, or maybe she leaves behind a tattered scroll although at this point it's not that useful unless you have a new use for it ;)

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    1. I don't take it wrong, don't worry.
      I have not render any more images of the corrupted elfs girl... But I believe we'll see her again, fully transformed. Almost sure, no promises, depends on how the story goes.

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  26. It seems that Martin trained more bloody fighting style - I feel sorry for poor goblins, Martin was too hard on them.
    I hope that Martin will break the piercing curse and enslave that omnibus someday

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    1. Well I recon he was losing too many fights, for a guys that spent his life training for combat, also he is corrupted and angry by now so he has less restrains when unleashing his fury.

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  27. I stumbled upon this fanfic quite a while ago and I have to say its very well done. Its always been a highlight of my month. Thanks so much for doing it.

    I'd like to ask you to consider adding the phoenix tower quest to the story. It was my favorite part of CoC.

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    1. Hi, thanks a lot! I'm glad you find it so good.
      No, sadly the Phoenix Tower is not on my main script so far

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  28. Great great stuff! I especially enjoyed the post-script with the foreboding veiled figure. I know just enough about the CoC story line to guess what direction you might take with this at one point. I'm looking forward to it. :)

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    1. Thanks! I'm just not sure if we'll get there soon or maybe closer to the end

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  29. This was unbelievable! I am mind blown. I've just discovered your work today and i am amazed, i came 3 times reading from beginning to end and after i went back en came more 2 times. Thank you, i love your work. Part XI was incredible, i can't believe you used futa + forced body modification + bondage + orgasm denial + mind break, i came so much i almost passed out, PLEASE do that again if you can.

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    1. Thanks, a bit too much information, but thanks anyway.
      For what I see in the comments, Part 11 so far has been the most favoured one

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  30. Yesss! There's that piercing ;)
    And it was a nice final fight scene, too. Guess we won't see any of that in the near future ;) Looking forward to the next chapter. :)

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    1. Thanks Rel!
      Maybe we'll take a break from so much fighting... If you know what I mean

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  31. Will there be anymore pregnancy, or MILFS?

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    1. There are at least 2 more MILFs in CoC (3 if he does the phoenix quest).

      If you haven't already, you should go play the game at Fenoxo.com. Its free to play.

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  32. Another vote for preg here. :3

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    1. Yup voting for preg as well keep up the good work

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  33. Wow thanks, it's really a great chapter, your hard work is worth the wait and even more, you rule dude
    Just a question, are we going to see that bimbo liqueur being used in a certain harpy or a monk? because that'd be the best

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    1. WE'll see the Bimbo Liqueur in action but not yet. No more spoilers!

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  34. i wish for ceraph and another piercing... lo and behold, my wishes are granted.... much science has been advanced, many thanks for your contributions to society XD.

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    1. Lol, I guess it almost as important as finding a cure for cancer.
      Glad you get what you wished for! I'm still waiting my LaBova from last christmas

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  35. Just wonderful, I love these comics so much. Thank you for making them. I am ecstatic over seeing the Factory. While I know no spoilers or anything. I really want our Hero to turn into a full on Heroine(lose the cock)and lose her soul to become a powerful succubus. I love that ending in C.o.C., but it ends, and I want to see it continued. Either way, I'm sure I'll love what you have in store for us.

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    1. Thanks a lot!
      While I'm not sure how it will end yet, I admit i'm starting to get a bit tired, and have quite a lot of transformation waiting to happen!

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  36. Ciao Vip...what do I need the ring on the nipple?

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    1. Ciao Lorenzo!
      I don't understand what you mean this time! ask again in Italian

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    2. l'anello sul capezzolo a cosa serve?

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    3. Si sa che cosa il piercing capezzolo fa nel prossimo capitolo!

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  37. penis pierce please!!

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  38. I wish she finds some Cerulean Potion somewhere, either that or that we find Kelt already, maybe he could use her like Akbal did on chapter 11

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    1. I just can say, that is likely that the farm might be featured

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  39. Amazing series so far! Please tell me you're going to do an interpretation of the Essie "gardening" scene at some point. Keep up the fantastic work!

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    1. I think that would be very hard to make in 3D? But it would be super awesome!

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    2. ^^
      but... who knows... I wasn't planing on doing the Sand Trap, either

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  40. Excellent work as always. Realistically, when do envisage part 14 will be released?

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    1. In April? Vip does this in the sparetime after work and life, I guess. So unless death happens, or Vip happens to get an bad ending, part 14 will come;)

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    2. Best bet? 1 week.
      Likely? 2 weeks
      Pessimistic? 3 weeks

      I just returned from a work travel

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  41. Great work! Love the chapter and the whole series!
    Is it possible that the champion will become more feminine again?

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  42. Is there another hit to the intelligence coming up? I'm not super familiar with Coc

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    1. There will be. there are several ways to make the champions smarter or dumber

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  43. Ciao Vip, è da un po' che non commento, pur seguendo il tuo bel blog. Grandissimo come sempre! Complimenti per la tecnica 3d e le idee davvero creative.
    Sono proprio curioso, di scoprire cosa capiterà al nostro Campione.
    Personalmente, mi sarebbe piaciuta qualche mutazione bestiale in più, specie per la sua appendice maschile, come tipico di CoC...
    Così come spero ancora nell'incontro del centauro Kelt,
    che sicuramente saprebbe come sitemare il Campione.
    Ancora complimenti e saluti. Davide

    Hello Vip, is a bit 'I do not comment, while following your beautiful blog. Great as always! Compliments to the 3d technique and really creative ideas.
    I'm just curious to find out what will happen to our Champion.
    Personally, I would have liked a few more animal-like mutation, especially his naughty bits, as typical CoC ...
    Just as I still hope in the encounter of the centaur Kelt, that surely he would know how to fix the Champion.
    Again congratulations and greetings. Davide

    PS: on piercings in DAZ3D, I believe the use of Rigid Node, may be for you.
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2CJWelfIMxI

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    1. Hi Davide!
      Quite an useful tip. Seems like you're always learning and learning stuff with DAZ sometime!
      I'll try it out and see if it works for me. thanks a lot!

      Oh, and about Kelt... Kelt is dangerously close to one of the game's bad ending, you know?

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  44. Hey Vip can we expect to see next chapter this week ? :p (best bet I saw :p)

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    1. Sorry, maybe this weekend if we're lucky

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  45. Hey VIP as usual your stuff rocks
    I found this site the other day loads of free cartoons while the downloading is slow and restricted so you can only download so many per hour/day there are loads there to pick from might make the waiting easier for some of your other impatiently waiting fans
    https://svscomics.com/category/gender+bender

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    1. try this site. no downloading required. all of vip's work can be found here

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    2. do NOT download my work from there.
      They profit from MY FREE work with the ads and popups before every download.

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  46. Hey Vip, your stuff is great, is posting the next chapter this weekend looking hopeful?? Keep it up!

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    1. We'll see if I can make it this weekend. again, probably have to chop the chapter in half, its getting very large

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  47. ho god... i love your art so much...! Hi Vip ! This is as always an amazing work. i can't wait to see next part. But i was wondering if you could add some doggy or piggy things to our champion (i mean, now he already have a pretty tail), things witch could help him/her to think or look like a little more like animal's female. i was thinking of cute little snout with fat lips, but not too much, in oder to allowed martin to stay slutty and pretty (of course, we don't want to hurt her feminity ;)), but just a mark of bestiality wo could hit again our fighter's honnor. Just enough for beeing permanently ashamed of what he had become :) (I was also thinking about bendzz's art on deviantart, with those bunny secretary, if you have already seen that.) And of course, anything witch could make Martin more feminine, including remooving his cock if necessary. it's just an idee. Anyway,i trust you for doing better of our hopes, and you already did : i'm a big fan of your art.

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    1. Hey! thanks a lot!
      I only wish I could do in 3D what those guys do in their drawing. The most challenging part of morphing the 3D models is not leaving them look as the nightmare version of what you imagined!
      That being said, I can tell you there will be some peppers in the comic, just like in the game. If you know what that means...

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  48. I feel like VIP may be feeling a bit too much pressure to pump out work on this series. Sure, they are aweasome but you are trying to do the work that someone would get paid for to do as an all-time job.
    Maybe you should work on lighter projects later. I know you already know what you want to do but I want to suggest what many in your situation do that is some kind of diary (of your style), that way you just need to do a few renders a week (like 5 or 6), which I think would be less stressful for you.
    That's just what I think though, I still love your work and want you to keep it up as much as you can :)

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    1. Pressure is nice, nicer than indiference. But no, I do not feel so much pressure, mainly because I'm not getting paid and I can manage my own times, one of the main reasons why I keep this as a hobby and never do commisions.

      Also, I'm surprised at the lack of trolls in the comments. Only a couple so far and it's been so long since this comic started!

      Developer diaries... I don't know. Takes time away from the actual comic making. Maybe from time to time a post about development to ease the waiting

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  49. Hype 14 part!

    Хотелось бы понаблюдать за процессом создания комиксов. Был бы очень признателен, даже за информацию по программам (софту). Спасибо за комиксы!

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    1. (Я надеюсь, что Google Translate получит это право)
      Я рад, что тебе это нравится. Я использую студию DAZ для трехмерной работы и ретуширования, Comic Life для создания комикса (макета страницы, панели, диалоговые окна) и Photoshop, чтобы исправить мелкие проблемы в некоторых рендерах.
      Я вряд ли мог бы объяснить весь процесс в комментарии, но все эти программы нелегко изучить, а в Интернете более чем достаточно учебников

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  51. Thanks for your work, really looking forward to the next chapter!

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    1. thanks for taking the time to comment!

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  52. Я просто влюбился в эту историю о трансформации!!!

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    1. Ницца! Надеюсь, вам понравятся следующие главы, изменения в Чемпионе еще не завершены!

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    2. calm down. Not everything needs to be updated constantly to be "alive"!

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  54. When will add next chapter?

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    1. when he's good and ready to do it and not a second before

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    2. Maybe this weeked, maybe I'll chop it in half.

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  55. Damn people, scroll up and read, VIP mentioned that a release this weekend would happen as a BEST CASE scenario but that it was much more likely to be released next weekend or the weekend after that.

    *sigh* Some people...

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    1. Don't be mad, I'm not.
      I do not expect people to read much. I know most scroll down to the download links, and reading 100 comments can be quite boring!

      I'll be worried the day no one cares if I release the new chapter!

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  56. Привет! Если интересно, могу придумывать сюжеты (вплоть до поз) )
    Как пример

    Путешествие принца

    Крутой телохранительнице, совершившей крупную провинность, поручают сопроводить "лишнего" принца в монастырь (чтобы не мог претендовать на престол).
    На деле это означает "отвести подальше за угол и убить".

    Действующие лица:
    Воительница Арра
    Принц
    Паж принца
    Небольшой отряд воинов

    1. Принц слишком погружен в думы о судьбах королевства и не видит, как изнывающая от недостатка мужского внимания воительница пытается его склеить.
    Воительница приглашает в палатку несколько воинов из отряда сопровождения.
    Принц, погруженный в свои мысли, этого не замечает, но его паж смотрит во все глаза.
    2. На другой день сцена повторяется. Паж принца не выдержав начинает мастурбировать.
    3. На третий день Арра мастурбирует, глядя на мальчишек... паж мастурбирует в ответ. Это замечает принц и удивляется - "Что вы делаете?".
    В ответ Арра кладет руку пажа на член принца, и паж начинает дрочить член повелителя. Принц неуверенно отвечает.
    4. Арра снова трахается со стражником, отсасывая здоровенному негру прямо перед мальчишками. Затем она поворачивается к пажу и предлагает присоединиться.
    Паж начинает сосать... и заглатывает неожиданно глубоко.
    Арра целует пажа, а потом поворачивается к принцу и предлагает устроить соревнование, кто возьмет в рот больше члена.
    Принц отказывается...
    5. Утром следуещего дня принц обнаруживает себя связанным. Паж извиняется перед принцем, говоря, что его заставили, и вставляет принцу в рот свой маленький член.
    Принц не может возразить из-за кляпа-кольца во рту.
    А воительница сосет принцу, пока он принимает в ро член собственного пажа.
    7. Принц не может сопротивляться - у него эрекция от члена собственного стражника во рту!
    8. Паж тем временем охотно принимает рукоятку от меча телохранительницы
    (путешествие, во время которого принц и его паж становятся первостатейными блядями с членами и титьками, которые трахаются как с людьми, так и с монстрами. При этом в стране тем временем - переворот; попытка сбыть принца в монастырь проваливается, потому что принцсоблазняет всех монахов);
    королевская стража находит принца и сажает его на престол... и королевство становится тем ещё развратным местечком)

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    1. Распаленное женское тело распласталось на тончайших простынях ливийского паучьего шёлка, вздрагивая от прокатывающихся по мышцам сладострастным волнам.
      Виновница оргазма – рослая северянка с длинными волосами льдисто-белого цвета оторвалась от местечка между широко раскинутых ног подруги потянулась к стоящему у изголовья мечу.
      Длинная, на четыре ладони, рукоять увенчивалась массивным шишковидным навершием, и не требовалось особой догадливости, чтобы понять, для каких надобностей варварка могла бы использовать эту игрушку.
      Нагретый в пламени факела наконечник уже достаточно остыл, и, небрежно стерев простыней копоть, северянка приставила навершие к святая святых. Анатомия раковины любви была уже неплохо изучена ею с помощью длинных, тонких, но сильных пальцев с коротко обрезанными ногтями и юркого языка, поэтому удар – нанесенный с должной силой и нежностью – был направлен верно.
      Подруга вскрикнула, не удержавшись, но северянка не останавливалась, продолжая ритмично действовать рукоятью меча в девственно-узком отверстии. И уже спустя несколько секунд крик боли и неожиданности перешел в сладострастные и ничем не сдерживаемые стоны.
      Именно так и застал Финвел Второй Рогатый свою дочь Альту – бесстыдно принимающей в себя меч капитана северной стражи Арры Герр, - будь прокляты эти варварские племена и имена шайтаном! – меч, в казармах стражи давно прозванный Лишателем Девственности.
      В этот раз Валькирия выбрала любовницу явно не по себе.


      Способ связи- где укажешь )

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    2. Святое дерьмо, которое было много, чтобы перевести и прочитать!
      Поскольку я не говорю по-русски, мне пришлось использовать Google Translate, и некоторые части перевода не имели никакого смысла.

      Я думаю, что я понимаю большую часть истории, но мне не нравится концовка. Я полагаю, что Рпинце нужно связать цепями и продать варварам, его давним врагам, как рабам!

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  57. Hi guys, I've been out for a few days, sorry for the lack of responses. I'll be answering the comments soon

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    1. Ciao Lorenzo! OK di tutto, ero ansioso di tornare a casa e continuare a lavorare sul fumetto. Tutto OK in Italia?

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    2. In Italia tutto Ok!! Grazie!! Prendi il tuo tempo per un ottimo lavoro.

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  59. VipCaptions,

    It's always a pleasure to have the benefit of your work. I respect your work ethic because rather than using the same system and methods for your stories you've made advances in your techniques and technology pushing yourself to a higher quality which takes more time and effort.

    Being able to find your earliest work online and seeing your growth in terms of art, rendering, characters and story to where you are now is a great achievement. While quietly respectful, I wanted to take this moment to make mention that with anything personally crafted I know that it's ready when it's ready.

    Thanks again, as always looking forward to the next chapter!

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  60. Ciao vip !
    Hai in programma di modificare anche i piedi del campione facendoli diventare più demoniaci come artigli ?

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  61. thx for explain (спасибо за объяснение по soft)

    Я как технический специалист, если и займусь этим, то обязательно оставлю ссылку на тебя. Спасибо за информацию. Спасибо за комиксы. Жду 14 часть!

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  62. Hello VIP! Great chapter! The story is getting better and better, it is a very fun ride. I'm waiting impatiently for the completion of chapter XIV.
    Concerning the champion, I hope he doesn't lose his male genitalia or if he does that he get it back (maybe using some more incubus draft to look like ever more demonic?). I believe that the champion should experience all kinds of pleasure and try to resist it as best as he can... in his current state (lol). I like the way he tries to remember his mission and focus (but failing or going totally berserk).
    I appreciated the fact that at the end of chapter XII that the champion at to go barefoot :P, it does give a feeling of him being more "savage". Otherwise, you forgot that he couldn't equip his bottom anymore (if we can even consider it a cloth so it doesn't really matter).
    Will the Cum-witch destroy his top before having her way with him? Will the champion find new clothes and be affected by the curse again (his reaction could be fun to see again)? Will he pierce his other nipple with a new nipple ring?
    I sure will sit and watch what you will give us for the next chapters ;)!

    See ya! (And sorry for the long post)

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